Sept. 1, 2020
In San Francisco, there have many style buildings. The Temple in Chinatown, some of the Victoria-style single house in Ingleside, the many new styles house in Sunset. For those buildings, we could see a cultural diffusion at different times. Chinatown's temple reflects Chinese religious beliefs. Chinatown's building type also reflects the historical event at that time. The most of buildings in Chinatown are rather camped and the streets are narrow. In my view, it like 19 century Hongkong. People don't have much space to live in. So they built the houses as possible as small to rent many people to live. Additionally, the early Chinese immigrants of San Franciso, many of them are from South China, especially HongKong. Their coming is not just a religious belief spreading. And they export their idea, character, nature throughout the building in Chinatown.
For the Victoria- style single house, we could know the style of Victory-style from British. When British immigrants land in American Land. Their building style was changed. they were not focused on the designing interior structure, which will be looks plush. For instead, they more focus on the exterior of the house color matching. Those changes we could feel the cultural diffusion from British immigrants.
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For those buildings, we couldan see a cultural diffusion at different times.
Chinatown's temple reflects Chinese religious beliefs.
Chinatown's building types also reflects the historical event ats of that time.
The most of buildings in Chinatown are rather camped and the streets are narrow.
In my view, it is like 19th century Hongk Kong.
People don't have much space to live in.
So they built the houses as possible as small to rent out to many people to live in.
Additionally, the early Chinese immigrants of San Franciso, many of them are from South China, especially Hong Kong.
Their coming is not just a religious belief spreading.
And tThey exported their idea, character, nature throughout the building in Chinatown.
For the Victoria- style single house, we could knoware aware of the style of Victory-style from British.
When British immigrants landed in American Land.
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For iInstead, they more focused more on the exterior of the house color matching.
TIn those changes we could feel the cultural diffusion from British immigrants.
culture influences the way we see
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TSome examples are the Ttemple in Chinatown, some of the Victoria-style single houses in Ingleside, and the many new styles houses in Sunset.
The word "temple" is only capitalized when it is in a proper noun, not when on its own. For example the sentence would have to include the full name of the temple for it to be a proper noun:
"Some examples are the Tin How Temple in Chinatown, the Victoria-style single houses in Ingleside, and the many new style houses in Sunset."
For those buildings, we could see a cultural diffusion at different times.
Chinatown's temple reflects Chinese religious beliefs.
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I don't think "that time" is a great phrase to use because it is unclear which time period you are talking about.
The mMost of the buildings in Chinatown are rather cramped, and the streets are narrow.
In my view, it is like 19th century Hongk Kong.
People doidn't have much space to live in.
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This correction combines this sentence with the next one. On its own this sentence was incomplete.
tThey were not focused on the designing the interior structure, which will be looks plush.
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Good job! The architecture of San Francisco and how it relates to the history of immigration is fascinating.
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In San Francisco, there have many style buildings. In San Francisco, there Alternatively, "San Francisco has many building styles." In San Francisco, there |
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The Temple in Chinatown, some of the Victoria-style single house in Ingleside, the many new styles house in Sunset.
The word "temple" is only capitalized when it is in a proper noun, not when on its own. For example the sentence would have to include the full name of the temple for it to be a proper noun: "Some examples are the Tin How Temple in Chinatown, the Victoria-style single houses in Ingleside, and the many new style houses in Sunset." |
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For those buildings, we could see a cultural diffusion at different times. This sentence has been marked as perfect! For those buildings, we c |
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Chinatown's temple reflects Chinese religious beliefs. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Chinatown's building type also reflects the historical event at that time. Chinatown's building type also reflects the historical event I don't think "that time" is a great phrase to use because it is unclear which time period you are talking about. Chinatown's building types also reflect |
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The most of buildings in Chinatown are rather camped and the streets are narrow.
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People don't have much space to live in. People d If you are referring to the past in Hong Kong, then it should be "didn't," but if you are referring to the present then "don't" is correct. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So they built the houses as possible as small to rent many people to live. So they built the houses as So they built the houses as possible as small to rent out to many people to live in. |
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Additionally, the early Chinese immigrants of San Franciso, many of them are from South China, especially HongKong. Additionally, many of the early Chinese immigrants to Additionally, the early Chinese immigrants of San Franciso, many of them are from South China, especially Hong Kong. |
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Their coming is not just a religious belief spreading. Their Their coming is not just |
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And they export their idea, character, nature throughout the building in Chinatown.
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For the Victoria- style single house, we could know the style of Victory-style from British. For the Victoria For the Victoria- style single house, we |
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When British immigrants land in American Land. When British immigrants landed in America This correction combines this sentence with the next one. On its own this sentence was incomplete. When British immigrants landed in America |
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they were not focused on the designing interior structure, which will be looks plush.
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For instead, they more focus on the exterior of the house color matching.
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Those changes we could feel the cultural diffusion from British immigrants. Those changes meant we could feel the cultural diffusion from British immigrants.
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