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Sept. 19, 2024

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Cultural difference

Last year at the end of July my friends and I went to Japan. And despite the humidity of around 70-80% and temperature of more than 35 degrees, we still walked around 200 km in 2 weeks. For the last few days, we used any chance to sit somewhere just for a bit.

One day, we bought some cold drinks and stepped by an underground pedestrian crossing. It had a roof so we could hide in the shadows while thinking about where to go next and something that looked like a step where we decided to sit. I noticed some Japanese writings on the A4 paper inside the punched pocket taped to the wall, but I was too tired to care about it. While sitting and exploring the map, people passing by were looking at us. An elderly man even stopped with the intention to say something but seems changed his mind and walked away.

I couldn't stand the feeling that we were doing something wrong, so I translated the signs, and it said "No sit, no, eat, no drink."
I still feel embarrassed for our action, and even the fact that this sign didn't look like an official sign (just A4 paper taped to the wall) without any English translation can't chill me out.

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Last year, at the end of July, my friends and I went to Japan.

And dDespite the humidity ofbeing around 70-80% and the temperature ofbeing more than 35 degrees, we still walked around 200 km in 2 weeks.

For the last few days, we used anevery chance to sit somewhere just for a bit.

One day, we bought some cold drinks and stepped by an underground pedestrian crossing.

That's awesome!

It had a roof, so we could hide in the shadows while thinking about where to go next and, We decided to sit on something that looked like a step where we decided to sit.

I noticed some Japanese writings on the A4 paper inside the punched pocket taped to the wall, but I was too tired to care about it.

While sitting and exploring the map, people passing by were looking at us.

An elderly man even stopped with the intention to say something, but he seemsed to changed his mind and walked away.

I couldn't stand the feeling that we were doing something wrong, so I translated the signs, and it said "NoDon't sit, no,don't eat, noand don't drink."

I still feel embarrassed for our actions, and even the fact that this sign didn't look like an official sign (just A4 paper taped to the wall) without any English translation can't chill me outs spooked/scared me.

Cultural dDifferences

Last year at the end of July my friends and I went to Japan.

And despite the humidity of around 70-80% and temperatures of more than 35 degrees, we still walked around 200 km in 2 weeks.

For the last few days of the trip, we used any chance to sit somewhere just for a bit.

"For the last few days" is usually used to refer to the few days leading up to the current moment, so adding "of the trip" helps make it clear that it's the last few days of the trip and not the last few days of the present.

One day, we bought some cold drinks and steopped by an underground pedestrian crossing.

It had a roof so we could hide in the shadows while thinking about where to go next and something that looked like a step where we decided to sit.

I noticed some Japanese writings on thea piece of A4 paper inside the punched pocket taped to the wall, but I was too tired to care about it.

"the A4 paper" wouldn't be right here because this is the first time you're mentioning the paper and "the" is usually used when you're talking about something that has already been talked about or that the listener is already aware of.

An elderly man even stopped with the intention to say something but seemsed to changed his mind and walked away.

I couldn't stand the feeling that we were doing something wrong, so I translated the signs, and it said "No sitting, no, eating, no drinking."

I still feel embarrassed forabout our actions, and even the fact that this sign didn't look like an official sign (just A4 paper taped to the wall) without any English translation can't chill me out.) doesn't make me feel any better.

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Cultural dDifferences

Cultural dDifferences

Last year at the end of July my friends and I went to Japan.


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Last year, at the end of July, my friends and I went to Japan.

And despite the humidity of around 70-80% and temperature of more than 35 degrees, we still walked around 200 km in 2 weeks.


And despite the humidity of around 70-80% and temperatures of more than 35 degrees, we still walked around 200 km in 2 weeks.

And dDespite the humidity ofbeing around 70-80% and the temperature ofbeing more than 35 degrees, we still walked around 200 km in 2 weeks.

For the last few days, we used any chance to sit somewhere just for a bit.


For the last few days of the trip, we used any chance to sit somewhere just for a bit.

"For the last few days" is usually used to refer to the few days leading up to the current moment, so adding "of the trip" helps make it clear that it's the last few days of the trip and not the last few days of the present.

For the last few days, we used anevery chance to sit somewhere just for a bit.

I couldn't stand the feeling that we were doing something wrong, so I translated the signs, and it said "No sit, no, eat, no drink."


I couldn't stand the feeling that we were doing something wrong, so I translated the signs, and it said "No sitting, no, eating, no drinking."

I couldn't stand the feeling that we were doing something wrong, so I translated the signs, and it said "NoDon't sit, no,don't eat, noand don't drink."

I still feel embarrassed for our action, and even the fact that this sign didn't look like an official sign (just A4 paper taped to the wall) without any English translation can't chill me out.


I still feel embarrassed forabout our actions, and even the fact that this sign didn't look like an official sign (just A4 paper taped to the wall) without any English translation can't chill me out.) doesn't make me feel any better.

I still feel embarrassed for our actions, and even the fact that this sign didn't look like an official sign (just A4 paper taped to the wall) without any English translation can't chill me outs spooked/scared me.

One day, we bought some cold drinks and stepped by an underground pedestrian crossing.


One day, we bought some cold drinks and steopped by an underground pedestrian crossing.

One day, we bought some cold drinks and stepped by an underground pedestrian crossing.

That's awesome!

It had a roof so we could hide in the shadows while thinking about where to go next and something that looked like a step where we decided to sit.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It had a roof, so we could hide in the shadows while thinking about where to go next and, We decided to sit on something that looked like a step where we decided to sit.

I noticed some Japanese writings on the A4 paper inside the punched pocket taped to the wall, but I was too tired to care about it.


I noticed some Japanese writings on thea piece of A4 paper inside the punched pocket taped to the wall, but I was too tired to care about it.

"the A4 paper" wouldn't be right here because this is the first time you're mentioning the paper and "the" is usually used when you're talking about something that has already been talked about or that the listener is already aware of.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

While sitting and exploring the map, people passing by were looking at us.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

An elderly man even stopped with the intention to say something but seems changed his mind and walked away.


An elderly man even stopped with the intention to say something but seemsed to changed his mind and walked away.

An elderly man even stopped with the intention to say something, but he seemsed to changed his mind and walked away.

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