June 15, 2025
It’s my first time on this website
Today, My sister, mother and I went to a shopping mall. There are a lot of people because today is Sunday. We went to a Game Center called “Round1” and played crane games. I got a cushion of hotdog ! Shape of this cushion is like a hotdog. That’s very funny! I love this cushion. After that, we came back to our home. Tonight is my sister’s birthday party. Mom is going to make a lot of dishes so I’m so exciting! I have to help her, so this diary is stop here! Thank you for reading.
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It’s my first time on this website
Today, Mmy sister, mother and I went to a shopping mall.
Today, my sister, mother and I went to a shopping mall.
There awere a lot of people because today is Sunday.
There were a lot of people because today is Sunday.
We went to a Game Center called “Round1” and played crane games.
I got a cushion of hotdog cushion!
I got a hotdog cushion!
SThe shape of this cushion is like a hotdog.
The shape of this cushion is like a hotdog.
That’s very funny!
I love this cushion.
After that, we camewent back to our home.
After that, we went back to our home.
Tonight is my sister’s birthday party.
Mom is going to make a lot of dishes, so I’m so excitinged!
Mom is going to make a lot of dishes, so I’m so excited!
I have to help her, so this diary isentry will stop here!
I have to help her, so this entry will stop here!
Thank you for reading.
Today, Mmy sister, mother and I went to a shopping mall.
Today, my sister, mother and I went to a shopping mall.
There awere a lot of people because today is Sunday.
There were a lot of people because today is Sunday.
We went to a Game Center called “Round1” and played crane games. We went to a Game Center called “Round1” and played crane games.
I've never used curly quotes before; that's a nice touch
I got a cushion of hotdog hot dog cushion!
I got a hot dog cushion!
This is more natural. People don't often use exclamation marks these days, it's your choice, though
SThe shape of this cushion is like a hot dog.
The shape of this cushion is like a hot dog.
'The cushion was shaped like a hot dog' is better, in my opinion
I love this cushion. I love this cushion.
After that, we came back to our home.
After that, we came back home.
Tonight is my sister’s birthday party. Tonight is my sister’s birthday party.
Mom is going to make a lot of dishes, so I’m so excitinged!
Mom is going to make a lot of dishes, so I’m so excited!
I have to help her, so this diary is stops here!
I have to help her, so this diary stops here!
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Notwithstanding some minor mistakes, your English is very solid. I'm actually learning Japanese, but it's pretty hard 泣きそう. I don't feel like writing, and my reading speed is slow.
Today, Mmy sister, mother and I went to a shopping mall.
Today, my sister, mother and I went to a shopping mall.
There are a lot of people because today is Sunday. There are a lot of people because today is Sunday.
We went to a Game Center called “Round1” and played crane gamon the claw machines.
We went to a Game Center called “Round1” and played on the claw machines.
I got a cushion ofstuffed hotdog !
I got a stuffed hotdog!
Shape of this cushion is like a hotdog. Shape of this cushion is like a hotdog.
This sentence is not needed if the previous correction is made
After that, we camewent back to our home.
After that, we went back to our home.
Mom is going to make a lot of dishes so I’m so excitinged!
Mom is going to make a lot of dishes so I’m so excited!
I have to help her, so this diary iswill stop here!
I have to help her, so this diary will stop here!
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Today, My sister, mother and I went to a shopping mall.
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There are a lot of people because today is Sunday. There are a lot of people because today is Sunday. There are a lot of people because today is Sunday.
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We went to a Game Center called “Round1” and played crane games.
We went to a Game Center called “Round1” and played We went to a Game Center called “Round1” and played crane games. We went to a Game Center called “Round1” and played crane games. I've never used curly quotes before; that's a nice touch This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I got a cushion of hotdog !
I got a
I got a This is more natural. People don't often use exclamation marks these days, it's your choice, though
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Shape of this cushion is like a hotdog. Shape of this cushion is like a hotdog. Shape of this cushion is like a hotdog. This sentence is not needed if the previous correction is made
'The cushion was shaped like a hot dog' is better, in my opinion
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After that, we came back to our home.
After that, we
After that, we came back
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Tonight is my sister’s birthday party. Tonight is my sister’s birthday party. Tonight is my sister’s birthday party. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Mom is going to make a lot of dishes so I’m so exciting!
Mom is going to make a lot of dishes so I’m so excit
Mom is going to make a lot of dishes, so I’m so excit
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I have to help her, so this diary is stop here!
I have to help her, so this diary
I have to help her, so this diary
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Thank you for reading. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I love this cushion. I love this cushion. I love this cushion. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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