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I have a lot of memories from there. I have a lot of memories from there.

I groew up and studiedwent to school there. I grew up and went to school there.

I groew up and studied school there. I grew up and studied there.

You “study a topic” and “study AT a place, “ so you could say “I studied history there” or “I studied at school there,” but you can also just say “studied” an we will assume it was your general school education.

The only thing that I don’t like is a so little city whosethat it is a small city with no good services, transportation, or entertainment isn’t good at all. The only thing that I don’t like is that it is a small city with no good services, transportation, or entertainment.

The only thing that I don’t like is a soliving in such a little city whose services, transportation, entertainment isn’t good at all. The only thing that I don’t like is living in such a little city whose services, transportation, entertainment isn’t good at all.

The latest time that I was there, it was about 5 years ago. The last time I was there was about 5 years ago.

The latest time that I was there, it was about 5 years ago. The latest time that I was there, it was about 5 years ago.

I hope some day to go back. I hope some day to go back.

I hope some day to go back. I hope some day to go back.

I hope some day go backto go back someday. I hope to go back someday.

It is a little city, the weather is hot, and the local people are friendly, i. It is a city with bunchfull of culture fromwith huge colonial houses to the gastronomic, the food it isand delicious food. It is a little city, the weather is hot, and the local people are friendly. It is full of culture with huge colonial houses and delicious food.

I broke this sentence into two because it was becoming a run-on sentence. This way it is easier to read and makes more sense.

It is a little city, the weather is hot, and the local people are friendly, i. It is a city with bunch culture from huge colonial houses to the gastronomic, the food it is delicious. It is a little city, the weather is hot, and the local people are friendly. It is a city with bunch culture from huge colonial houses to the gastronomic, the food is delicious.

I don’t know what “It is a city with bunch culture from huge colonial houses to the gastronomic” means. Are you talking about brunch culture? Or just lots of culture? And I’m not sure what you’re saying with “to the gastronomic.”

There is an old church so old, it built up in century XV, which it is a placebuilt in the 15th Century that attractive fors many tourists. There is an old church built in the 15th Century that attracts many tourists.

There is a very old church so old, it built up inin the 15th century XV, which it is a places an attractive place for many tourists. There is a very old church old built in the 15th century which is an attractive place for many tourists.

There is a church so old, it built up in century XV, which it is a place attractive for manyvery old church that was built in the 15th century. It is a popular sightseeing spot for tourists. There is a very old church that was built in the 15th century. It is a popular sightseeing spot for tourists.

I think, many foreigners would like the colonial architecture the colonial zone in the old downtown,. It is very nice. I think foreigners would like the colonial architecture the in the old downtown. It is very nice.

I think, many foreigners like the architecture of the colonial zone in the old downtown, is very nice. I think many foreigners like the architecture of the colonial zone in the old downtown, is very nice.

This move you back toward past centuriesIt makes you feel as though you are centuries in the past. It makes you feel as though you are centuries in the past.

I think this is what you were trying to say. That visiting the old downtown area is like walking into the past, right?

As I said before, it would be better have goodgood if it had better services, transportation and entertainment. As I said before, it would be good if it had better services, transportation and entertainment.

As I said before, it would be better to have good services, transportation and entertainment. As I said before, it would be better to have good services, transportation and entertainment.

It would be a city more attractive forto tourists. It would be a city more attractive to tourists.

A little, but I can see through photos that it looks almost equalthe same since I went ouas last there. A little, but I can see through photos that it looks almost the same since I was last there.

A little, I can see through photos it looks almost equal since Iidentical as whent out there I left. A little, I can see through photos it looks almost identical as when I left.

“Equal” doesn’t necessarily mean the same, its used more when talking about the number or size of two things being the same.

No, in fact most people usually use their own car, you can arrive tdrive. You can easily go many places because everything is close to one another. No, in fact most people usually drive. You can easily go many places because everything is close to one another.

No, in fact most people usually use their own car, you can arriveget to many places because everything is close to one another. No, in fact most people usually use their own car, you can get to many places because everything is close to one another.

No, in fact, most people usually usdrive their own car, you can arrive to get around the city. You can easily go/get to many places because everything is close to one another. No, in fact, most people usually drive their own car to get around the city. You can easily go/get to many places because everything is close to one another.

One of the correctors forgot to put "to" after "go". "Use" is fine but I think it would be more natural to say "drive".

It so securis very safe for any children, but I think that any child willthey would bore very quickly. It is very safe for children, but I think that they would bore very quickly.

It is a city more attractive forto adults. It is a city more attractive to adults.