March 18, 2024
Crowded
I passed through Nagoya Station on Sunday.
There were a lot of people with suitcase and it was very crowded.
There were long lines in front of many local food restaurants.
Even Nagoya was so crowded, so I thought tourist destinations like Kyoto would also be extremely crowded.
日曜日に名古屋駅を通った。
スーツケースを持った人たちが沢山居て、とても混んでいた。
名古屋めしのレストランの前にすごい列ができていた。
名古屋でこれだけ混んでいるなら、京都などの観光地はすごいことになっていそうだと思った。
Crowded
I passed through Nagoya Station on Sunday.
There were a lot of people with suitcases and it was also very crowded.
There were long lines in front of many local food restaurants.
Restaurant's by definition, are stores which sell food, so you can just say "restaurants".
Even Nagoya was so crowded, so I thought tourist destinations like Kyoto would also be extremely crowded.
March 19, 2024
Thank you for your corrections.
I wanted to say, "restaurants serving local dish."
Does “local restaurant” mean the same thing in this case?
There were a lot of people with suitcases and it was very crowded.
There were long lines in front of many local food restaurants.
A restaurant means "a place where food is sold", so you don't need to add it here : )
EIf even Nagoya was so crowded, so I thought, tourist destinations like Kyoto would alsomust be extremely crowded.
You don't need "also" here because the sentence structure implies that they will be related. This structure is always used to mean something like "If even X (which is not normally ###) is ###, then Y (which is normally ###) must be even more ###."
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Simple, but almost perfect! Nice job.
March 19, 2024
Thank you for your corrections and comments.
I wanted to say, "restaurants serving local dish."
Does “local restaurant” mean the same thing in this case?
March 21, 2024
Not quite — two examples for you:
1. I hope to eat at a local restaurant when I visit Yuwa, Akita --> I want to eat at restaurants that are in the Yuwa area / well known in Yuwa
2. I hope to eat some local dishes when I visit Yuwa, Akita --> I want to eat foods that are typical of what people eat in the Yuwa area
A "local restaurant" may not necessarily serve "local food"
March 25, 2024
I got it.
Thank you for taking the time to explain my quension!
Crowded
I passed through Nagoya Station on Sunday.
There were a lot of people with suitcases and it was very crowded.
There were long lines in front of many local food restaurants.
Even Nagoya was so crowded, so I thought tourist destinations like Kyoto would also be extremelybe even more crowded.
March 19, 2024
Thank you for your corrections.
Crowded
I passed through Nagoya Station on Sunday.
There were a lot of people with suitcases, and it was very crowded.
There were long lines in front of many local food restaurants.
EIf even Nagoya was thiso crowded, so I thought tourist destinations like Kyoto would also be extremely crowded.
Or "like Kyoto would be extremely crowded." To me, that sounds more natural.
March 19, 2024
Thank you for your corrections.
Crowded
I passed through Nagoya Station on Sunday.
There were a lot ofmany people with suitcases and it was very crowded.
There were long lines in front of many local food restaurants.
EvenI thought that if Nagoya was so crowded, so I thought tourist destinations like Kyoto would also be extremely crowded.
March 19, 2024
Thank you for your corrections.
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Even Nagoya was so crowded, so I thought tourist destinations like Kyoto would also be extremely crowded.
Or "like Kyoto would be extremely crowded." To me, that sounds more natural.
You don't need "also" here because the sentence structure implies that they will be related. This structure is always used to mean something like "If even X (which is not normally ###) is ###, then Y (which is normally ###) must be even more ###." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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