April 15, 2022
Crossfit: a great sports mixture
Crossfit is a relative new way to workout. It's been trendy for the last 10 years. I discover it around five years ago, although I was attracted I didn't begin to practise it until three years later.
At first, it was pretty difficult because Crossfit comprise exercises highly demanding technically. Even so, its weightlifting, gymnastic and calisthenic combination made me fall in love with it.
While it's a tough sport, I really recommend anyone to give it a try. It's a very amusing activity and trainers assist yo to adapt the training to any age and condition.
If you're going to the gym switch machineries to dumbells, rigth now!
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If you're going to the gym, switch from machineries (?) to dumbells, rigtht now!
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Crossfit is a relative new way to workout.
It's been trendy for the last 10 years.
I discovered it around five years ago, although I was attracted to it, I didn't begin to practise it until three years later.
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At first, it was pretty difficult because Crossfit is comprised of exercises whighly demandingch are highly technically demanding .
This word order sounds more natural.
Even so, its combination of weightlifting, gymnastic and calisthenic combinations made me fall in love with it.
This word order is more natural
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(try) is correct, however, if you want to use a popular indiom/expression you could use shot instead. To give something a shot means to try something.
It's a very amusingfun activity and trainers assist you to adapt the training tofor any age andor condition.
In english amusing is normally used to mean funny. Because crossfit is not funny but it is fun, fun is a better word to use.
If you're going go to the gym switch from machineries to dumbells, rigtht now!
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A really interesting journal entry. I workout quite a bit but I don't ever do any crossfit, I often do powerlifting excercises. I will have to give crossfit a go somewhen!
April 15, 2022
Thank you for so extensive explanations.
Usually the first time is free, you don't lose anything by trying
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While it's a tough sport, I really recommend anyone to give it a try.
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