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Scarlett_Father

Nov. 26, 2022

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Cross Nation Romance

Probably many young people are dreaming of a cross-nation datinig, different cultures, foreign languages, and different skin colors. They all make this romance looks interesting.
But as I know, quite a lot of them would fail in the end, and the reasons vary. My niece a Chinese girl left his Indian boyfriend last month, they met at the University in America 6 years ago. Both of them have found good jobs in CA, they bought a house with a loan after working for one year.
It's a big problem about how to deal with their house.

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Cross NInternational Romance

Probably mMany young people are probably dreaming of a cross-international datinig,g because of the different cultures, foreign languages, and different skin colors.

They all make this romance looks interesting.

But as I know, quite a lot of them wouldill fail in the end, and the reasons vary.

This correction is more natural in the US.

My niece who is a Chinese girlwoman left hiser Indian boyfriend last month, t. They met at the Ua university in America 6 years ago.

Both of them have found good jobs in CA, t. They bought a house with a loan after working for onea year.

It's a big problem about how to deal with their house.

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Nice work. I'm sorry to hear about your niece. I hope they are able to figure out something amicably.

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Scarlett_Father

Nov. 27, 2022

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Thanks for your care! :-)

Cross -Nation Romance

Probably many young people are dreaming of a cross-nation datinig, different cultures, foreign languages, and different skin colors.

They all make this romance looks interesting.

But as I know, quite a lot of them would fail in the end, and the reasons vary.

My niece a Chinese girl left hiser Indian boyfriend last month, they met at the Uuniversity in America 6 years ago.

Both of them have found good jobs in CA, they bought a house with a loan after working for one year.

It's a big problem about how to deal with their house.

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Excellent, only a few minor errors! Let me know if you need any clarification :-)

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Scarlett_Father

Nov. 26, 2022

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Thank you! I am really happy to see "Excellent" :-)

Cross Nation Romance


Cross -Nation Romance

Cross NInternational Romance

Probably many young people are dreaming of a cross-nation datinig, different cultures, foreign languages, and different skin colors.


Probably many young people are dreaming of a cross-nation datinig, different cultures, foreign languages, and different skin colors.

Probably mMany young people are probably dreaming of a cross-international datinig,g because of the different cultures, foreign languages, and different skin colors.

They all make this romance looks interesting.


They all make this romance looks interesting.

They all make this romance looks interesting.

But as I know, quite a lot of them would fail in the end, and the reasons vary.


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But as I know, quite a lot of them wouldill fail in the end, and the reasons vary.

This correction is more natural in the US.

My niece a Chinese girl left his Indian boyfriend last month, they met at the University in America 6 years ago.


My niece a Chinese girl left hiser Indian boyfriend last month, they met at the Uuniversity in America 6 years ago.

My niece who is a Chinese girlwoman left hiser Indian boyfriend last month, t. They met at the Ua university in America 6 years ago.

Both of them have found good jobs in CA, they bought a house with a loan after working for one year.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Both of them have found good jobs in CA, t. They bought a house with a loan after working for onea year.

It's a big problem about how to deal with their house.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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