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June 27, 2022

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Cross Bicycle

I bought cross bicycle for 45,000 yen this weekend. It was a great deal since prices of imported goods including bicycles have been soaring these days. The price of the same model displayed next to the one I bought was 10,000 yen higher than mine. The sales staff said that they will be forced to increase the prices since next month.
I decided to buy it in order to save my time. I have spent more than one hour to go to the school gym by regular bicycle and enjoyed playing badminton every Thursday. But, I found it difficult to keep this habit without shortening travel time so that I need it. I'm looking forward to seeing how much time cross bicycle can eliminate my travel time.

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Cross Bicycle

I bought a cross bicycle for 45,000 yen this weekend.

It was a great deal, since prices of imported goods, including bicycles, have been soaring these days.

The price of the same model displayed next to the one I bought was 10,000 yen higher than mine.

The sales staff said that they will be forced to increase the prices since next month.

I decided to buy it in order to save my time.

I have spent more than one hour to gogoing to the school gym by regular bicycle, and enjoyed playing badminton every Thursday.

But, I found it difficult to keep this habit without shortening travel time so that I need it.

I'm looking forward to seeing how much time cross bicycle can help eliminate my travel time.

Cross Bicycle


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I bought cross bicycle for 45,000 yen this weekend.


I bought a cross bicycle for 45,000 yen this weekend.

It was a great deal since prices of imported goods including bicycles have been soaring these days.


It was a great deal, since prices of imported goods, including bicycles, have been soaring these days.

The price of the same model displayed next to the one I bought was 10,000 yen higher than mine.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The sales staff said that they will be forced to increase the prices since next month.


The sales staff said that they will be forced to increase the prices since next month.

I decided to buy it in order to save my time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have spent more than one hour to go to the school gym by regular bicycle and enjoyed playing badminton every Thursday.


I have spent more than one hour to gogoing to the school gym by regular bicycle, and enjoyed playing badminton every Thursday.

But, I found it difficult to keep this habit without shortening travel time so that I need it.


But, I found it difficult to keep this habit without shortening travel time so that I need it.

I'm looking forward to seeing how much time cross bicycle can eliminate my travel time.


I'm looking forward to seeing how much time cross bicycle can help eliminate my travel time.

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