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March 9, 2024

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Criminals Return to the Crime Scene

Likewise, the knee hitter returned to the accident point of the trail run course even though he stopped practicing now.

It was not the root of a tree that I hit my left toe to fall.
It was the edge of an artificial loan's 5 cm stepped-up surface.
I thought I was running in nature, not on the artificially paved road.
I was practicing running on the rough surface of the nature-made road, instead of the artificial flat road.
So it was ironic that I turned out to be fallen by something artificial.
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犯人は現場に戻るのが犯罪心理である。

同様に、ころんでひざを打った者は、今走るのをやめているにも関わらず、トレイルランコースの転倒現場に戻ってきた。

僕がつまずいて転んだのは木の根っこではなかった。
人工芝が敷いてある端で5㎝程度の段差が出来ている端につまずいたのだった。
僕は人工的につくられた道ではなくて、自然の中を走っているつもりだった。
舗装された平坦な道ではなく、天然の凹凸のある道を走る練習をしているつもりだった。

だから、自然の凹凸ではない人工物につまずくとは皮肉なものだとおもった。(笑)

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Criminals Return to the Crime Scene

It was the edge of an artificial loan's 5 cm stepped-up surface.

I thought I was running in nature, not on the artificially paved road.

So it was ironic that I turned out to be fallen by something artificial.

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Criminals Return to the Crime Scene

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Criminals Return to the Crime Scene

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Likewise, the knee hitter returned to the accident point of the trail run course even though he stopped practicing now.


Likewise, the knee hitter returned to the scene of the accident point ofon the trail run course even though he (has) stopped practicing now. Likewise, the knee hitter returned to the scene of the accident on the trail run course even though he (has) stopped practicing now.

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Likewise, the knee hitterrunners who fall and hit their knee returned to the accident point of the trail run course even though he stopped practicing nowplace where they fell. Likewise, runners who fall and hit their knee return to the place where they fell.

We don't normally say "knee hitter" in English (I've never heard it before), but I think "runners who fall and hit their knee" or "someone who falls and hits their knee" seems better. I think "even though he stopped practicing now" seems unnecessary to add and makes the sentence less clear and concise.

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Likewise, the knee hitterone who fell returned to the accident point ofsite of the fall, on theat trail run course, even though he has stopped practicing now. Likewise, the one who fell returned to the site of the fall, on that trail run course, even though he has stopped practicing now.

It was not the root of a tree that I hit my left toe to fall.


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It was the edge of an artificial loan's 5 cm stepped-up surface.


It was the 5 cm raised edge of an artificial loan's 5 cm stepped-up surface(?). It was the 5 cm raised edge of an artificial loan(?).

“Loan” must be a typo. What do you mean?

It was the edge of an artificial loan'sturf with a 5 -cm stepped-up surface. It was the edge of an artificial turf with a 5-cm stepped-up surface.

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It was the edge of an artificial loan's 5 cm stepped-upawn, which step protruded 5 cm from the surface. It was the edge of an artificial lawn, which step protruded 5 cm from the surface.

I thought I was running in nature, not on the artificially paved road.


I thought I was running in nature, not on the artificiallya paved road. I thought I was running in nature, not on a paved road.

“Artificially” isn’t necessary since paving is always artificial.

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I thought I was running ion nature, not on thean artificially paved road. I thought I was running on nature, not on an artificially paved road.

I was practicing running on the rough surface of the nature-made road, instead of the artificial flat road.


I thought I was practicing running on the rough surface of thea nature-made road, instead of thean artificial flat road. I thought I was practicing running on the rough surface of a nature-made road, instead of an artificial flat road.

I wonder if you might mean a trail or path instead of a “road.” Roads are usually meant for vehicles of some sort.

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So it was ironic that I turned out to be fallen by something artificial.


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So, it was ironic that I turned out to be fallen byfell because of something artificial. So, it was ironic that I fell because of something artificial.

Likewise, the knee hitter returned to the point of the trail run course even though he stopped practicing now.


It was not the root of a tree I hit my left toe and fell.


It was the edge of an artificial loan's 5 cm stepped surface.


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