Oct. 24, 2025
Creepypasta
Do you know creepasta?
When I was younger, I loved look at some videos about creepypasta.
It was the glory time of youtube with the great Pewdiepie and others French youtubers. (Oh no,I speak like an old woman.)
I think about one of them.
It was a creepypasta about the game Zelda (Exactly Majora's Mask) who was hunted.
It was an old version of Zelda for the Nintendo 64 (best game station ever).
The first character, Link, who's most of time really sympathetic, was kind of strange in this version.
I don't remember all the details, but I was pretty scared about this.
Maybe because I always loved Zelda, and at this age, I was afraid by a lot of things.
I willingly admit : I liked horror, always today!
Do you know about creepypasta?
When I was younger, I loved look at some watching videos about creepypasta.
It was the glory timolden age of yYoutTube, with the great PewdDiepPie and others French yYoutTubers.
(Oh no, I speak like an old woman.)
Do you know cCreepypasta?
Because this is a name, you'll want to capitalize the first letter.
When I was younger, I loved to look at some videos about cCreepypasta.
Same correction with the proper noun - capitalize the first letter.
It was the glory timedays of yYoutTube with the great Pewdiepie and others French yYoutTubers.
I switched it to "glory days" instead of "glory time". This is more how we would say that in English. Otherwise, I'm just correcting the capitalization. Oh, and you would say "other French YouTubers". Even though "YouTubers" is plural, you would still use "other" instead of "others".
(Oh no, I speak like an old woman.)
IThese days, I still think about one of them.
These corrections just make it flow a bit more naturally. Nothing wrong with how you wrote it, but "these days" brings us back to the present tense.
It was a cCreepypasta aboutfrom the game Zelda (Exactly Majora's Mask) who was hunted.
I think you mean Creepypasta from Zelda? Is that a character in the game? If so, you'd use "from" instead of "about".
It was an old version of Zelda for the Nintendo 64 (best game stationconsole ever).
We would call it a "game console" instead of a "game station"/
The first character, Link, who's most of time really sympa is sympathetic most of the ticme, was kind of strange in this version.
Just switched the order of some words here to make it more natural.
I don't remember all the details, but I was pretty scared about this.
Maybe because I always loved Zelda, and at thisat age, I was afraid byof a lot of things.
You'd want to say "at that age" to link it back to the past. If you say "at this age", it implies your present age. You'd say, "I was afraid of a lot of things", not "by a lot of things". Small errors, the tiny words are confusing!
I willingly admit : I liked horror, always then, and I still do today!
I think this is what you meant. You liked it in the past, and you still do now.
Feedback
I understood the bulk of this! The changes that I made were minor. Remember to capitalize the first letter of proper nouns (names, titles, etc). I don't know of Creepypasta, but this sounds like a core memory for you! Very appropriate around Halloween time!
Oct. 24, 2025
Thank you very much for the feedback!
Yes, it's the right period aha!
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Do you know creepasta? Do you know Because this is a name, you'll want to capitalize the first letter. Do you know about creepypasta? |
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When I was younger, I loved look at some videos about creepypasta. When I was younger, I loved to look at some Same correction with the proper noun - capitalize the first letter. When I was younger, I loved |
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It was the glory time of youtube with the great Pewdiepie and others French youtubers. It was the glory I switched it to "glory days" instead of "glory time". This is more how we would say that in English. Otherwise, I'm just correcting the capitalization. Oh, and you would say "other French YouTubers". Even though "YouTubers" is plural, you would still use "other" instead of "others". It was the g |
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(Oh no,I speak like an old woman.) (Oh no, I speak like an old woman.) (Oh no, I speak like an old woman.) |
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I think about one of them.
These corrections just make it flow a bit more naturally. Nothing wrong with how you wrote it, but "these days" brings us back to the present tense. |
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It was a creepypasta about the game Zelda (Exactly Majora's Mask) who was hunted. It was a I think you mean Creepypasta from Zelda? Is that a character in the game? If so, you'd use "from" instead of "about". |
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It was an old version of Zelda for the Nintendo 64 (best game station ever). It was an old version of Zelda for the Nintendo 64 (best game We would call it a "game console" instead of a "game station"/ |
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The first character, Link, who's most of time really sympathetic, was kind of strange in this version. The first character, Link, who Just switched the order of some words here to make it more natural. |
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I don't remember all the details, but I was pretty scared about this. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Maybe because I always loved Zelda, and at this age, I was afraid by a lot of things. Maybe because I always loved Zelda, and at th You'd want to say "at that age" to link it back to the past. If you say "at this age", it implies your present age. You'd say, "I was afraid of a lot of things", not "by a lot of things". Small errors, the tiny words are confusing! |
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I willingly admit : I liked horror, always today! I willingly admit I think this is what you meant. You liked it in the past, and you still do now. |
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