Jan. 6, 2024
I'm interested foreign food.
I've bought a lot of food on Amazon.
For example, the American snack, Poptarts, Goldfish crackers, Funnyons, and Monster Munch from the UK, and Baklava from Turkey.
I'm always excited until I receive them after I order.
Now, I'm thinking about buying cranberry Sauce.
I searched for it on Amazon and found canned jellied cranberry sauce.
It was ¥2000 for two.
It's a little bit expensive, but I think worth trying.
Also, I'm planning to order Heinz baked beans.
私は、外国の食べ物に興味があります。
今まで色々な食べ物をアマゾンで購入しています。
例えば、アメリカのスナックのポップターツ、ゴールドフィッシュクラッカー、ファニヨンズ、
イギリスのスナックモンスターマンチ、トルコのデザート、バクラバなどです。
いつも注文してから届くのを楽しみにしています。
今、クランベリーソースを買おうと考えています。
アマゾンで調べて、缶のゼリータイプのクランベリーソースを見つけました。
二個で約¥2000です。
ちょっと高いですけど試す価値あると思います。
その他にも、へインツのベークドビーンズも注文するつもりです。
I'm interested in foreign food.
I've bought a lot of food onfrom Amazon.
For example, the American snack, Poptarts, Goldfish crackers, and Funnyons, and from the US, Monster Munch from the UK, and Baklava from Turkey.
I'm always excited untilto I receive them after I order.
The "until" here suggests that you were for some reason no longer excited when it arrived (like it wasn't as good as you expected or something).
Now, I'm thinking about buying cranberry Sauce.
I searched for it on Amazon and found canned jellied cranberry sauce.
It was ¥2000 for two.
It's a little bit expensive, but I think it's worth trying.
Also, I'm planning to order Heinz baked beans.
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Very fun read! Hope you like the snacks you got
I'm interested in foreign food.
I've bought a lot of food on Amazon.
For example, the American snack, Poptarts, Goldfish crackers, Funnyons, and from the UK, Monster Munch from the UK, and Baklava from Turkey.
After I order it, I'm always excited until I receive them after I order.
Now, I'm thinking about buying cranberry Ssauce.
I searched for it on Amazon and found canned jellied cranberry sauce.
It was ¥2000 for two.
It's a little bit expensive, but I think worth trying.
Also, I'mI'm also planning to order Heinz baked beans.
Cranberry Sauce
I'm interested in foreign food.
I've bought a lot of food on Amazon.
For example, the American snack,I bought Poptarts, Goldfish crackers, Funnyons, andand Funyuns from America; Monster Munch from the UK,; and Baklava from Turkey.
Semicolons can be used to separate items in a list, which is useful in cases like this where you have something like a list of American snacks inside a bigger list.
Also I assume you meant Funyuns.
I'm always excited until Ito receive them after I order.
Now, I'm thinking about buying cranberry Ssauce.
I searched for it on Amazon and found canned jellied cranberry sauce.
It was ¥2000 for two.
It's a little bit expensive, but I think it's worth trying.
Also, I'm planning to order Heinz baked beans.
Cranberry Sauce
I'm interested in foreign food.
I've bought a lot of food on Amazon.
For example, the American snack,I've bought Popt-Tarts, Goldfish crackers, Funnyons, andand Funyuns from the US. I've also bought Monster Munch from the UK, and Bbaklava from Turkey.
What you wrote is a little difficult to read, so I think it's easier to read if you break it into two sentences.
I'm always excited until Iabout receiveing them after I order.
Now, I'm thinking about buying cranberry Ssauce.
I searched for it on Amazon and found canned jellied cranberry sauce.
It was ¥2000 for two.
It's a little bit expensive, but I think it's worth trying.
"I think it's worth trying" is grammatically correct. As toomuchtothink said, however, "but I think worth trying" is fine in informal conversation or in an informal message.
Also, I'm planning to order Heinz baked beans.
Cranberry Sauce
I'm interested foreign food.
I've bought a lot of food on Amazon.
For example, the American snack,s Poptarts, Goldfish crackers, and Funnyons, and Monster Munch from the UK, and Baklava from Turkey.
I'm always excited until I receive them after I order.
It sounds like you stop feeling happy when you receive them, but I don't think you mean that. Maybe: "I always can't wait until I receive them after I order", meaning it's always really exciting to wait, and you want the snacks to come faster so you can enjoy them.
Now, I'm thinking about buying cranberry Sauce.
I searched for it on Amazon and found canned jellied cranberry sauce.
It was ¥2000 for two.
It's a little bit expensive, but I think worth trying.
It's good informal style. Some people might correct it to say "but I think it's worth trying". It's just a little more organized and officially correct.
Also, I'm planning to order Heinz baked beans.
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