Feb. 21, 2024
Crab Bowl (48)
I had a crab bowl when I went to Hokkaido.
There were many restaurants that they serve fresh seafood in a area called "Nijoichiba"
My friend wanted to eat a sea urchin bowl, but I wanted to eat a crab bowl, so we went to a different restaurant each other.
The crab bowl costed ￥2980 included a crab miso soup.
It was pretty expensive.
I was a little bit disappointed because the crab wasn't fresh.
Apparently, the crab looked like a frozen crab that they thaw before they serve.
It was a little bit soggy.
北海道に行ったとき、かに丼を食べました。
二条市場というところに、新鮮なシーフードを出してくれるレストランがたくさんありました。
友達はうに丼を食べたかったけど、私はカニ丼を食べたかったので私達はそれぞれ別々のレストランに行きました。
カニ丼とカニの味噌汁で２９８０円でした。
かなり高いですね。
ちょっと残念だったのは、カニは新鮮ではありませんでした。
どうやら、冷凍のカニを解凍したもののようでしたでした。
少しべちゃべちゃ水っぽい感じがしました。
Crab Bowl
I had a crab bowl when I went to Hokkaido.
There were many restaurants that they serve fresh seafood in an area called "Nijoichiba"
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My friend wanted to eat a sea urchin bowl, but I wanted to eat a crab bowl, so we each went to a different restaurant each other.
The crab bowl costed ￥2980, which included a crab miso soup.
It was pretty expensive.
I was a little bit disappointed because the crab wasn't fresh.
Apparently, tThe crab looked like a frozen crab that they thaw before they serveing.
It was a little bit soggy.
Feb. 22, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction!
Crab Bowl
There were many restaurants that they serve fresh seafood in an area called "Nijoichiba"
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My friend wanted to eat a sea urchin bowl, but I wanted to eat a crab bowl, so we went to a different restaurant each others.
The crab bowl costedwas ￥2980 and included a crab miso soup.
It was pretty expensive.
I was a little bit disappointed because the crab wasn't fresh.
Apparently, tThe crab looked like a frozen crab that they thawed before they served it.
I think it's better to take out the word "apparently" here. The word "apparently" is used to say you have read or been told something, but you are not certain it is true. For example, "Apparently it's going to rain this weekend."
It was a little bit soggy.
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Great writing. Sorry that the crab bowl was disappointing!
Feb. 22, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction! Year, it was disappointing, and also it was very small.
Crab Bowl
I had a crab bowl when I went to Hokkaido.
There were many restaurants that they serve fresh seafood in a area called "Nijoichiba"
¶in a area called "Nijoichiba" where they serve(d) fresh seafood.¶
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My friend wanted to eat a sea urchin bowl, but I wanted to eat a crab bowl, so we went to a different restaurant each others.
The crab bowl costed ￥2980 includeding a crab miso soup.
It was pretty expensive.
I was a little bit disappointed because the crab wasn't fresh.
Apparently, the crab looked like a frozen crab that they thawed before they served it.
It was a little bit soggy.
Feedback
I was going to say - that does seem pretty expensive! Although, usually seafood dishes are just more expensive in general, which is unfortunate because seafood is so healthy.
Feb. 22, 2024
Thank you so much for your correction! Yes, it was very expensive, but I tried because I felt like I had to eat fresh seafood while I'm in Hokkaido.
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Apparently, the crab looked like a frozen crab that they thaw before they serve. Apparently, the crab looked like a frozen crab that they thawed before they served it.
I think it's better to take out the word "apparently" here. The word "apparently" is used to say you have read or been told something, but you are not certain it is true. For example, "Apparently it's going to rain this weekend."
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