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It is believed that the more commodities we have produced, the more devastating impact on nature. In my opinion, our whole process to generate mass produced productions is the cause of this, and we also need the cooperation from governments and citizens to whittle away at this issue.
The whole process of industrial production hardly ever takes consideration of the environment. In other words, most manufacturers demand a number of trucks to help them transport materials from receiving raw materials to selling goods they have done. We can witness the diesel fumes from trucks both in the city and countryside, which may cause air pollution. We can also see some creeks in the country are so filthy that we can easily deduce that there must be some factories in the vicinity of them. As processing products, especially metals, might form some toxic gases or chemical substances discharged into the atmosphere or rivers, this is likely to contribute to water pollution, not just air pollution. In order to promote their sales, companies tend to package their products, most of which are packed by paper arising from desertification since the decrease in woods.
It is the responsibility for governments and inhabitants to work together to tackle environmental problems. In terms of governments, they can provide incentives to the organizations or people that are enthusiastic about protecting the environment. For citizens, it is our duty to oversee whether the government fulfills its obligation to minimize contaminants, to impart environmental knowledge to our younger generations, and to bring in new laws to crack down on actions which pollute our environment.
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Why the increase in the production of goods (or products) results in damage to the environment.
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It is believed that the more commodities we produce, the more devastating the impact on nature.
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In my opinion, our whole process to generate mass produced products is the cause of this. We need the cooperation of governments and citizens to address this issue.
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Industrial production hardly ever takes into consideration the environmental impact.
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For example, most manufacturers demand trucks to transport materials from producers to the consumers.
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The diesel fumes from these trucks causes air pollution.
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Some creeks in the country are filthy from nearby factories.
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Processing products, especially metals, can discharge toxic gases or chemical substances into the atmosphere or rivers. This contributes to water pollution, not just air pollution.
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In order to promote their sales, companies tend to package their products. The demand for paper packages contributes to deforestation.
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It is the responsibility of governments and citizens to work together to tackle environmental problems.
In terms of gGovernments, they can provide incentives to the organizations or people that are enthusiastic about protecting the environment.
Governments can provide incentives to organizations or people that are enthusiastic about protecting the environment.
For citizens, it is our duty to oversee whether the government fulfills its obligation to minimize contaminants, to impart environmental knowledge to our younger generations, and to bring inpass new laws to crack down on actions which pollute our environment.
For citizens, it is our duty to oversee whether the government fulfills its obligation to minimize contaminants, to impart environmental knowledge to younger generations, and to pass new laws to crack down on actions which pollute our environment.
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The process of industrial production hardly ever considers the environment.
In other words, mMost manufacturers demand a number of trucks to help them transport materials from receiving raw materials to selling goods they have done.
Most manufacturers demand a number of trucks to help them transport materials from receiving raw materials to selling goods.
We can witness tThe diesel fumes from trucks both in the city and countryside, which may cause air pollution.
The diesel fumes from trucks both in the city and countryside may cause air pollution.
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Why increase in goods production results in damage to envir Why increase in goods production results in damage to envir Why increase in goods production results in damage to envir Why the increase in the production of goods (or products) results in damage to the environment. |
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It is believed that the more commodities we have produced, the more devastating impact on nature.
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In my opinion, our whole process to generate mass produced productions is the cause of this, and we also need the cooperation from governments and citizens to whittle away at this issue.
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In my opinion, our whole process to generate mass produced product "whittle away at" doesn't sound natural here. |
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The whole process of industrial production hardly ever takes consideration of the environment.
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In other words, most manufacturers demand a number of trucks to help them transport materials from receiving raw materials to selling goods they have done.
I think this is a good example of how production can negatively impact the environment. |
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We can witness the diesel fumes from trucks both in the city and countryside, which may cause air pollution.
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We can also see some creeks in the country are so filthy that we can easily deduce that there must be some factories in the vicinity of them.
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As processing products, especially metals, might form some toxic gases or chemical substances discharged into the atmosphere or rivers, this is likely to contribute to water pollution, not just air pollution.
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In order to promote their sales, companies tend to package their products, most of which are packed by paper arising from desertification since the decrease in woods.
In order to promote their sales, companies tend to package their products |
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It is the responsibility for governments and inhabitants to work together to tackle environmental problems.
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In terms of governments, they can provide incentives to the organizations or people that are enthusiastic about protecting the environment.
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For citizens, it is our duty to oversee whether the government fulfills its obligation to minimize contaminants, to impart environmental knowledge to our younger generations, and to bring in new laws to crack down on actions which pollute our environment.
For citizens, it is our duty to oversee whether the government fulfills its obligation to minimize contaminants, to impart environmental knowledge to This is a great sentence! |
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