Jan. 11, 2020
Relief after a Scare
I took my son to see a doctor due to his terrible cough.
He didn’t cough at all when we arrived at the hospital, so he just got a skin patch that helps him breathe easier.
I was so worried and tired, but now I’m really relieved to see him sleeping peacefully next to me.
(corrected on Jan. 12th)
息子がひどく咳をするので、医者に診てもらいました。
病院に着いた時には全く咳をしていなかったので、息をしやすくする貼り薬をもらっただけでした。
とても心配して疲れましたが、私の隣で何事もなく眠っているのを見て、今とてもほっとしています。
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Relieved after being worried Relieved after being worried
I took my son to see a doctor due to his terrible cough.
He didn’t cough at all when we arrived at the hospital, so he just got a skin patch that makehelps him breathe easilyer.
He didn’t cough at all when we arrived at the hospital, so he just got a skin patch that helps him breathe easier.
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I’m glad he’s doing better now, that sounds very stressful!
Jan. 12, 2020
Thank you for the correction and your kind words!
Since this morning he’s been really fine.
I hope he will recover from the asthma soon.🙏🏻
Jan. 12, 2020
Relieved after being worried
You could also have "relief after being worried", or "relief after a scare" sounds like something that would be a title! I'm glad your son is doing better ^^
Jan. 12, 2020
Thank you for showing a good title!
It describes my feelings so well.
I’ll rewrite it later! ☺️
Relieved after worried
I took my son to see a doctor due to his terrible cough.
He didn’t cough at all when we arrived at the hospital, so he just got a skin patch that makeshelped him breathe easily.
He didn’t cough at all when we arrived at the hospital, so he just got a skin patch that helped him breathe easily.
I was so worried and tired, but now I’m really relieved to see him sleeping peacefully next to me.
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I’m glad that your son is all safe and well. It must be a terrible experience and I’m glad that your worry was temporary.
Jan. 11, 2020
Thank you for the correction!
He sometimes cough because of asthma, but it’s not serious one.
Tonight it went so seriously for the first time, and I was into a panic.😱
I hope he’ll get well and we’ll play together tomorrow!
I took my son to see a doctor due to his terrible cough.
He didn’t cough at all when we arrived at the hospital, so he just got a skin patch that makes him breathe easily. He didn’t cough at all when we arrived at the hospital, so he just got a skin patch that makes him breathe easily.
I was so worried and tired, but now I’m really relieved to see him sleeping peacefully next to me.
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Glad to hear your son is doing better!
Jan. 11, 2020
Thank you for the correction and your kind word!
I hope he’ll be fine tomorrow! :)
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He didn’t cough at all when we arrived a hospital, so he just got a skin patch that makes him breathe easily. He didn’t cough at all when we arrived at the hospital, so he just got a skin patch that makes him breathe easily. He didn’t cough at all when we arrived at the hospital, so he just got a skin patch that makes him breathe easily.
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He didn’t cough at all when we arrived at the hospital, so he just got a skin patch that helps him breathe easier. |
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