Dec. 9, 2020
I got the gardening thing from my friend. It was a plant, an Indoor Grow Kit. It included a pot, a Amaryllis bulb and a piece of grow mix( a compressed soil?) . I planted it following the growing instruction. My friend told me it will be growing very fast. I'm really looking forward it.
There was a funny thing. My another friend also got this gift. She didn't read the instruction. She went to the Dollarama and bought a package of soil to plant it. Fortunatly I met her this morning and she haven't done it yet. I told her that she doesn't need to buy the soil. The only thing she need to do is to add 600ml warm water to the pot with the piece of grow mix, than the grow mix will be growing and filling up the pot. It's amazing, isn't it? I also told her "read the instruction first please!" for 3 times. Haha...
I got thea gardening thing from my friend.
I got a gardening thing from my friend.
It was a plant, --an Indoor Grow Kit.
It was a plant--an Indoor Grow Kit.
It included a pot, an Amaryllis bulb, and a piece of grow mix( a (a piece of compressed soil?) .
It included a pot, an Amaryllis bulb, and a piece of grow mix (a piece of compressed soil) .
use "an" before a word that starts with a vowel such as "Amaryllis"
I planted it followingaccording to the growing instructions.
I planted it according to the growing instructions.
My friend told me it will be growing very fast.
My friend told me it will grow very fast.
I'm really looking forward it.to watching it bloom.
I'm really looking forward to watching it bloom.
There was a funny thing that happened. There was a funny thing that happened.
My another friend also gotreceived this gift.
My other friend also received this gift.
SHowever, she didn't read the instructions.
However, she didn't read the instructions.
She went to the Dollarama and bought a package of soil to plant it in. She went to the Dollarama and bought a package of soil to plant it in.
Fortunately, I met her this morning and she havedn't doneplanted it yet.
Fortunately, I met her this morning and she hadn't planted it yet.
The only thing she needs to do is to add 600ml of warm water to the pot with the piece of grow mix, tha. Then the grow mix will be growing and filling up the pot.
The only thing she needs to do is to add 600ml of warm water to the pot with the piece of grow mix. Then the grow mix will be grow and fill up the pot.
"Than" and "then" are very similar but they mean different things so be careful.
I also told her three times to "read the instructions first please!" I also told her three times to "read the instructions first please!"
for 3 times.
"for 3 times" isn't a complete sentence
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Dec. 8th, 2020 |
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I got the gardening thing from my friend.
I got |
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It was a plant, an Indoor Grow Kit.
It was a plant |
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It included a pot, a Amaryllis bulb and a piece of grow mix( a compressed soil?) .
It included a pot, an Amaryllis bulb, and a piece of grow mix use "an" before a word that starts with a vowel such as "Amaryllis" |
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I planted it following the growing instruction.
I planted it |
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My friend told me it will be growing very fast.
My friend told me it will |
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I'm really looking forward it.
I'm really looking forward |
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There was a funny thing. There was a funny thing that happened. There was a funny thing that happened. |
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My another friend also got this gift.
My |
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She didn't read the instruction.
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She went to the Dollarama and bought a package of soil to plant it. She went to the Dollarama and bought a package of soil to plant it in. She went to the Dollarama and bought a package of soil to plant it in. |
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Fortunatly I met her this morning and she haven't done it yet.
Fortunately, I met her this morning and she ha |
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I told her that she doesn't need to buy the soil. |
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The only thing she need to do is to add 600ml warm water to the pot with the piece of grow mix, than the grow mix will be growing and filling up the pot.
The only thing she "Than" and "then" are very similar but they mean different things so be careful. |
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It's amazing, isn't it? |
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I also told her "read the instruction first please!" I also told her three times to "read the instructions first please!" I also told her three times to "read the instructions first please!" |
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for 3 times.
"for 3 times" isn't a complete sentence |
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Haha... |
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