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My niece

My niece was admitted as a civil servant of Hangzhou city and there are more than 400 people competing for the position.
I knew she had been a smart girl since she was at elementary school because I checked her homework.
When she graduated from university she helped her family do some business, meanwhile she prepared for civil service exams and recruitment of public institutions.
This time she did a great job and I am so glad about what she has done.
Although she failed a few times, I believe she would be successful soon or later as long as she tries her best.
Finally, she did it.
I hope my offspring may not be officers, may not be millionaires, but they must have clever brains and hardworking hands. As long as they have that, they will live better and be happy.
Niece, congratulations! Keep working hard, you will have a bright future.

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My niece

This time she did a great job and I am so glad about what she has done.

Finally, she did it.

As long as they have that, they will live better and be happy.

Niece, congratulations!

Keep working hard, you will have a bright future.

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Jack

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My niece

I knew she had been a smart girl since she was at elementary school because I checked her homework.

This time she did a great job and I am so glad about what she has done.

Finally, she did it.

As long as they have that, they will live better and be happy.

Niece, congratulations!

Keep working hard, you will have a bright future.

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My niece


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My niece was admitted as a civil servant of Hangzhou city and there are more than 400 people competing for the position.


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I knew she had been a smart girl since she was at elementary school because I checked her homework.


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When she graduated from university she helped her family do some business, meanwhile she prepared for civil service exams and recruitment of public institutions.


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This time she did a great job and I am so glad about what she has done.


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Although she failed a few times, I believe she would be successful soon or later as long as she tries her best.


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Finally, she did it.


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I hope my offspring may not be officers, may not be millionaires, but they must have clever brains and hardworking hands.


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"offspring" would be your sons and daughters, not nieces and nephews.

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As long as they have that, they will live better and be happy.


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Niece, congratulations!


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Keep working hard, you will have a bright future.


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