Jan. 22, 2022
Today, I looked after my kids by myself.
Because, my wife had to go to work, so I should take care of my kids alone.
Three years ago when they were younger than now, it was very hard to spend time with them for me.
However, they have now grown older than before, and they played their own, so I didn't need to concentrate all time.
I am glad they are growing right way.
With My Kids
Today, I looked after my kids by myself.
Because, my wife had to go to work, so I shouldI had to take care of my kids alone.
Because, my wife had to go to work, I had to take care of my kids alone.
Three years ago when they were younger than now, it was very hard to spend time with them for me.
Three years ago when they were younger, it was very hard to spend time with them.
However, they have now grown older than before, and they played on their own, so I didn'o not need to concentrate all the time.
However, they have now grown older and they play on their own, so I do not need to concentrate all the time.
I am glad they are growing up the right way. I am glad they are growing up the right way.
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👍 well done
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This is because my wife had to go to work, so I was left to take care of my kids on my own.
I was taught to avoid starting a sentence with 'Because'
Three years ago, when they were younger than they are now, it was very hard for me to spend time with them for me.
Three years ago, when they were younger than they are now, it was very hard for me to spend time with them.
,Extra info goes in between two commas,
It was very hard to find the time to be with them. also works.
However, they have now grown older than before, and they playedstarted playing on their own, so I didn't need to concentrate allwatch over them all the time.
However, they have now grown older than before, and they started playing on their own, so I didn't need to watch over them all the time.
I am glad they are growing up the right way. I am glad they are growing up the right way.
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Well done :)
With My Kids With My Kids
This sentence is fine as is. Alternatively, "Watching the Kids" could be a good title.
Today, I looked after my kids by myself.
Because, mMy wife had to go to work, so I should taketook care of my kidsthem alone.
My wife had to go to work, so I took care of them alone.
The previous sentence mentioned that you were watching your kids, so in this sentence it's okay to use the pronoun "them" to avoid repetition.
Three years ago (when they were younger than now, it was), I found it very hard to spend time with them for me.
Three years ago (when they were younger), I found it very hard to spend time with them.
However, they have now grown older than beforeare older now, and theycan played on their own, so I didn't need to concentrate allon them all the time.
However, they are older now, and can play on their own, so I didn't need to concentrate on them all the time.
I am glad they are growing right wayup well.
I am glad they are growing up well.
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잘 했습니다! Your children sound cute. :)
Because, my wife had to go to work, so I shouldI had to take care of my kids alone.
Because my wife had to go to work, I had to take care of my kids alone.
Three years ago when they were younger than now, it was very hard for me to spend time with them for me.
Three years ago when they were younger, it was very hard for me to spend time with them.
However, since they havare now grown older than before, andolder, they played on their own, so I didn't need to concentrate all the time.
However, since they are now older, they play on their own, so I didn't need to concentrate all the time.
I am glad they are growing right wayup.
I am glad they are growing up.
Because, my wife hads to go to work, so I shouldI take care of my kids alone.
Because my wife has to go to work, I take care of my kids alone.
Three years ago when they were younger than they are now, it was very hard to spend time with them for me. Three years ago when they were younger than they are now, it was very hard to spend time with them for me.
However, they have now grown older than before, and theyand have played their own, so I didon't need to concentrate all time.
However, they have now grown older and have played their own, so I don't need to concentrate all time.
I am glad they are growing right wayup fast.
I am glad they are growing up fast.
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Great job! Just mini corrections.
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With My Kids With My Kids With My Kids This sentence is fine as is. Alternatively, "Watching the Kids" could be a good title. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today, I looked after my kids by myself. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because, my wife had to go to work, so I should take care of my kids alone.
Because
Because
The previous sentence mentioned that you were watching your kids, so in this sentence it's okay to use the pronoun "them" to avoid repetition.
I was taught to avoid starting a sentence with 'Because'
Because, my wife had to go to work, |
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Three years ago when they were younger than now, it was very hard to spend time with them for me. Three years ago when they were younger than they are now, it was very hard to spend time with them for me. Three years ago when they were younger than they are now, it was very hard to spend time with them for me.
Three years ago when they were younger
Three years ago (when they were younger
Three years ago, when they were younger than they are now, it was very hard for me to spend time with them ,Extra info goes in between two commas, It was very hard to find the time to be with them. also works.
Three years ago when they were younger |
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However, they have now grown older than before, and they played their own, so I didn't need to concentrate all time.
However, they have now grown older
However, since they
However, they
However, they have now grown older than before, and they
However, they have now grown older |
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I am glad they are growing right way.
I am glad they are growing
I am glad they are growing
I am glad they are growing I am glad they are growing up the right way. I am glad they are growing up the right way. I am glad they are growing up the right way. I am glad they are growing up the right way. |
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