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Nowadays more and more people choose living separately from their families. What are its causes and consequences?

There is no denying that in this day and age more and more people prefer living in their own apartments and being far away from the families. Can it relate to independence and maturity or it destroys family values? What are its causes and consequences? The following essay takes a look at both sides of the phenomenon.

On the one hand, in a modern world each person chases freedom and self-reliance. We have to realize ourselves and only living alone can help to get one's head around. Besides, being alone, a person can be a little bit more productive and spend more time reflecting on his or her actions. What’s more, only living separately man grows into adult one.

On the other hand, human as a biological species cannot exist without company or community. We all need people around us and our family, especially parents, is those only ones, who loves us unconditionally and it is strongly important to appreciate them. In addition, living together makes people corporate and discuss the problems with each other. Without any feedback and reaction to their behaviour person will not become the best version of yourself.

To elucidate, I should say that there is no "right way" to live your life. Everyone of us makes your own choices and decisions. Living separately is a wonderful way to get the feel of freedom an learn to take responsibility for your actions. But completely forgetting the family and relative does not lead to a happy life.


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Living separately

What are its causes and consequences?

The following essay takes a look at both sides of the phenomenon.

Besides, being alone, a person can be a little bit more productive and spend more time reflecting on his or her actions.

To elucidate, I should say that there is no "right way" to live your life.

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We have to realizedevelop ourselves, and only living alone can help to getone wrap one's head around that.

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We have to realize this ourselves, and only living alone can help one to get one'stheir head around this.

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Nowadays more and more people choose living separately from their families.


Nowadays more and more people choose livingto live separately from their families. Nowadays more and more people choose to live separately from their families.

Nowadays more and more people choose livingto live separately from their families. Nowadays more and more people choose to live separate from their families.

What are its causes and consequences?


What are itsthe causes and consequences of this? What are the causes and consequences of this?

The original was grammatically correct, but "its" didn't make sense because you hadn't referred to the choice to live separately as a trend or phenomenon, something that designates it as an object, so to speak.

There is no denying that in this day and age more and more people prefer living in their own apartments and being far away from the families.


There is no denying that in this day and age, more and more people prefer living in their own apartments and being far away from their families. There is no denying that in this day and age, more and more people prefer living in their own apartments and being far away from their families.

There is no denying that in this day and age, more and more people prefer living in their own apartments and being far away from their families. There is no denying that in this day and age, more and more people prefer living in their own apartments and being far away from their families.

Can it relate to independence and maturity or it destroys family values?


Can it relate to independence and maturity or does it destroys family values? Can it relate to independence and maturity or does it destroy family values?

Can it relate todevelop independence and maturity, or does it destroys family values? Can it develop independence and maturity, or does it destroy family values?

What are its causes and consequences?


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The following essay takes a look at both sides of the phenomenon.


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On the one hand, in a modern world each person chases freedom and self-reliance.


On the one hand, in a modern world, each person chases freedom and self-reliance. On the one hand, in a modern world, each person chases freedom and self-reliance.

We have to realize ourselves and only living alone can help to get one's head around.


We have to realize this ourselves, and only living alone can help one to get one'stheir head around this. We have to realize this ourselves, and only living alone can help one to get their head around this.

We have to realizedevelop ourselves, and only living alone can help to getone wrap one's head around that. We have to develop ourselves, and only living alone can help one wrap one's head around that.

Besides, being alone, a person can be a little bit more productive and spend more time reflecting on his or her actions.


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What’s more, only living separately man grows into adult one.


What’s more, only living separately maa man who lives on his own grows into an adult one. What’s more, only a man who lives on his own grows into an adult.

What’s more, only by living separatelyon his own can man grows into adult onehood. What’s more, only by living on his own can man grows into adulthood.

On the other hand, human as a biological species cannot exist without company or community.


On the other hand, humans as a biological species cannot exist without company or community. On the other hand, humans as a biological species cannot exist without company or community.

On the other hand, humans as a biological species cannot exist without company or community. On the other hand, humans as a biological species cannot exist without company or community.

We all need people around us and our family, especially parents, is those only ones, who loves us unconditionally and it is strongly important to appreciate them.


We all need people around us and our family, especially parents, isare those only ones, who loves us unconditionally and it is strong. It is highly important to appreciate them. We all need people around us and our family, especially parents, are the only ones who love us unconditionally. It is highly important to appreciate them.

We all need people around us and, including our family, and especially our parents, iswho are those only ones, who loves us unconditionally and it is strongl. It is very important to appreciate them. We all need people around us, including our family and especially our parents, who are the only ones who love us unconditionally. It is very important to appreciate them.

"Strongly" tends to modify verbs, not adjectives.

In addition, living together makes people corporate and discuss the problems with each other.


In addition, living together makes people corpo-operate and discuss the problems with each other. In addition, living together makes people co-operate and discuss problems with each other.

In addition, living together makes people corpooperate and discuss the problems with each other. In addition, living together makes people cooperate and discuss problems with each other.

Without any feedback and reaction to their behaviour person will not become the best version of yourself.


Without any feedback and reaction to their behaviour, a person will not become the best version of yourselfthemselves. Without any feedback and reaction to their behaviour, a person will not become the best version of themselves.

Without any feedback on and reactions to their behaviour, personople will not become the best version of yourselfthemselves. Without any feedback on and reactions to their behaviour, people will not become the best version of themselves.

To elucidate, I should say that there is no "right way" to live your life.


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Everyone of us makes your own choices and decisions.


Every one of us makes your own choices and decisions. Every one of us makes our own choices and decisions.

Every one of us makes your own choices and decisions. Every one of us makes our own choices and decisions.

Living separately is a wonderful way to get the feel of freedom an learn to take responsibility for your actions.


Living separately is a wonderful way to get the feel of freedom and learn to take responsibility for your actions. Living separately is a wonderful way to get the feel of freedom and learn to take responsibility for your actions.

But completely forgetting the family and relative does not lead to a happy life.


But completely forgetting the family and relative does not lead to a happy life. But completely forgetting the family does not lead to a happy life.

But completely forgetting the family and relatives does not lead to a happy life. But completely forgetting family and relatives does not lead to a happy life.

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