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If a heading in a subject line for instance, capitalizing the nouns looks nicer in some instances. This is one I think!

First of all, I want to thank all of you for the training we have withreceived from Reporting Services, d. Despite we already knew somus having some prior knowledge of the topics, there was some information very particularly useful, and in my particular case, I was able to appliedy some of that knowledge in my daily tasks for [Name of project].

I hope we can have more training sessions like this. one.

This was my first year working with [coworker name] in [Name of project] and h. He made it very easy for me to understand the project and I always received help and advice whenever I faced a problem ¶
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Better to break this up into two sentences.

I work with [coworker name] on the data centralization for [Name of project] again, and the [Name of project] Domain Migration,. He/She is a very hard-working person, and motivated and attentive to details, - even in internal projects ¶
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Also, I have also had the chance to work with [coworker name] with the [Name of project] Ecommerce, and I appreciate the clarity onshe/he gives me regarding the task/tasks I have to do, a. And as usual, just reading his code is enough for me to try to improve mine

Again, just breaking this long sentence up

First, I want to thank all of you for the training we have with Reporting Services, despite the fact that we already knew some of the topics, there was some information in the training that was very useful, i. In my particular case, I applied some of that knowledge in my daily tasks for [Name of project].

Avoiding run-on sentences,

This was my first year working with [coworker name] in [Name of project] and he made it very easy for me to understand the project and I always received help and advice when I faced a problem ¶
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I work with [coworker name] on the data centralization for [Name of project] again, and the [Name of project] Domain Migration,. He is a very hard-working person, and motivated and attentive to details, even in internal projects ¶
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Also, I have the chance to work with [coworker name] with thefor [Name of project] Ecommerce, and I appreciate the clarity on the task I have to do, and a. As usual, just reading his code is enough to try to improve mine

Second with should be "for" because it sounds like you're assigned to work with your co-worker for this project. Two "with"s doesn't make as much sense here.

Coworker's feedback letter

First, I want to thank all of you for the training we have done with Reporting Services, despite. Even though we already knew some of the topicsinformation, there was some informationthat was very useful, i. In my particular case, I applied some of that knowledge in my daily tasks for [Name of project].

This was my first year working with [coworker name] in [Name of project] and he made it very easy for me to understand the project and. Also, I always received help and advice whenever I faced a problem ¶
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Breaking it into two sentences helps it flow better.

I work with [coworker name] on the data centralization for [Name of project] again, and the [Name of project] Domain Migration,. [Coworker name] is a very hard-working person, and motivated and attentive to details, even ion internal projects ¶
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Also, I have had the chance to work with [coworker name] withon the [Name of project] E-commerce, and I appreciate the clarity onf the tasks I have to do, and as usual. In addition, just reading his code is enough to try to(make me want to try to / help me) improve mine.

I put in two options for that space in the last sentence because I feel it can be clarified a bit.