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Feb. 3, 2021

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covid 19 in the Middle East : a polemic ?

With the Covid 19 chrysis, many arguments are coming out, everyday, everywhere.

For instance, the polemic between the state of Israel and the Palestinian Authority.
Why an argument ? In fact, because if Israel has already vaccined more than 20 % of his population, what it is a very good success, we learned that the palestinian population in the Gaza Strip and in the West Bank (the occupied territories) wouldn't have been vaccinated. Or would have been less vaccinated (said Al Jazeera).

This is a political issue, obviously but not only and if it's very easy for the king of Jordan to say « you can't vaccine one part of the society and not the other and think you are going to be safe » we know he's definitely right !

The answer of Israel is to transfer 5000 vaccine doses to the Palestinian medical workers.
Will it be sufficient ? Likely not, because in Israel (around 10 millions of inhabitants) , the Palestinians are the quarter of the whole population...

Actually the truth is that this pandemic is a real mess and this polemic in the Middle East is one among many others , all around the world, not worse not better.

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cCovid 19 in the Middle East : a polemic ?

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., are capitalized in the title.

With the Covid 19 chryrisis, many arguments are coming out, everyday,occurring everywhere everywhereday.

For instance, the polemic between the state of Israel and the Palestinian Authority.

You can say "Israel" instead of "the state of Israel".

Why is there an argument ?

In fact, because ift's due to the fact that Israel has already vaccinated more than 20 % of histheir population, what it is a very good success, we learned thatas they've been extraordinarily successful. However, the pPalestinian population inof the Gaza Strip and in the West Bank (the occupied territories) wouldn't haven't been vaccinated.

Or would have been less vaccinated (saidless (according Al Jazeera).

This is a political issue, obviously but not onlyObviously this is not only a political issue, and if it's very easy for the king of Jordan to say « y"You can't vaccinate one part of the society and not the other and think you are going to be safe »," we know he's definitely right !

"you are" is often written/said as "you're".

"is not" is often written/said as "isn't".

The answer of Israel isIsrael's answer has been to transfer 5000 vaccine doses to the Palestinian medical workers.

Will it be sufficient ?

Likely not, because in Israel (which has around 10 millions of inhabitants) , the Palestinians are themake up quarter of thentire whole population...

Actually, the truth is that this pandemic is a real mess, and this polemic in the Middle East is one among many others , all around the world, notand they're making things worse, not better.

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jpr44

Feb. 4, 2021

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Thank you very much for your help!

covid 19 in the Middle East : a polemic ?


cCovid 19 in the Middle East : a polemic ?

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., are capitalized in the title.

With the Covid 19 chrysis, many arguments are coming out, everyday, everywhere.


With the Covid 19 chryrisis, many arguments are coming out, everyday,occurring everywhere everywhereday.

For instance, the polemic between the state of Israel and the Palestinian Authority.


For instance, the polemic between the state of Israel and the Palestinian Authority.

You can say "Israel" instead of "the state of Israel".

Why an argument ?


Why is there an argument ?

In fact, because if Israel has already vaccined more than 20 % of his population, what it is a very good success, we learned that the palestinian population in the Gaza Strip and in the West Bank (the occupied territories) wouldn't have been vaccinated.


In fact, because ift's due to the fact that Israel has already vaccinated more than 20 % of histheir population, what it is a very good success, we learned thatas they've been extraordinarily successful. However, the pPalestinian population inof the Gaza Strip and in the West Bank (the occupied territories) wouldn't haven't been vaccinated.

Or would have been less vaccinated (said Al Jazeera).


Or would have been less vaccinated (saidless (according Al Jazeera).

This is a political issue, obviously but not only and if it's very easy for the king of Jordan to say « you can't vaccine one part of the society and not the other and think you are going to be safe » we know he's definitely right !


This is a political issue, obviously but not onlyObviously this is not only a political issue, and if it's very easy for the king of Jordan to say « y"You can't vaccinate one part of the society and not the other and think you are going to be safe »," we know he's definitely right !

"you are" is often written/said as "you're". "is not" is often written/said as "isn't".

The answer of Israel is to transfer 5000 vaccine doses to the Palestinian medical workers.


The answer of Israel isIsrael's answer has been to transfer 5000 vaccine doses to the Palestinian medical workers.

Will it be sufficient ?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Likely not, because in Israel (around 10 millions of inhabitants) , the Palestinians are the quarter of the whole population...


Likely not, because in Israel (which has around 10 millions of inhabitants) , the Palestinians are themake up quarter of thentire whole population...

Actually the truth is that this pandemic is a real mess and this polemic in the Middle East is one among many others , all around the world, not worse not better.


Actually, the truth is that this pandemic is a real mess, and this polemic in the Middle East is one among many others , all around the world, notand they're making things worse, not better.

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