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April 17, 2022

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Covid-19

My son has covid-19. It sounds dangerous but everything is going well. The problem is always my mind: thinking too much, imagining all the bad situations that can come.

I deeply feel that we don’t care about our health as it needs. When illnes comes everyone run but it’s late. But what can we do? If we work too much we have not time for us. Maybe we need to prioritaze time over money, maybe this is the only drug we need.

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Covid-19

My son has covid-19.

It sounds dangerous but everything is going well.

The problem is always my mind: thinking too much, imagining all the bad situations that can come.

I deeply feel that we don’t care about our health as it needsmuch as we should.

When an illness comes everyone runs, but it’s too late.

But what can we do?

If we work too much we havedo not have time for uourselves.

Maybe we need to prioritaize time over money, m. Maybe this is the only drug we need.

I deeply feel that we don’t care about our health as it needs.much as we should

I am assuming here you mean that you don't think you care as much about your health as you think the topic deserves?
Sorry if I am incorrect or misinterpreting you :)

When illness comes everyone runs but it’s too late.

If we work too much we do not have not time for us.ourselves

Maybe we need to prioritaize time over money, maybe this is the only drug we need.

I had to use the internet to check I was correcting this spelling right. Don't worry, it is a difficult word to spell :)

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This is a good paragraph!
I only changed a few minor spelling errors
And I also changed some of your phrases because although someone would understand what you were saying, they were a bit unnatural because of word order or phrasing :)

Covid-19

My son has covid-19.

It sounds dangerous but everything is going well.

The problem is always my mind: thinking too much, imagining all the bad situations that can come.

I deeply feel that we don’t care about our health as it needs.

When illnes comes everyone runs, but it’s too late.

If we work too much we don't have not time for uourselves.

Alternatively: If we work too much we have no time for ourselves.

Maybe we need to prioritaze time over money, maybe this is the only drug we need.

Covid-19


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My son has covid-19.


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It sounds dangerous but everything is going well.


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The problem is always my mind: thinking too much, imagining all the bad situations that can come.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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I deeply feel that we don’t care about our health as it needs.


I deeply feel that we don’t care about our health as it needs.

I deeply feel that we don’t care about our health as it needs.much as we should

I am assuming here you mean that you don't think you care as much about your health as you think the topic deserves? Sorry if I am incorrect or misinterpreting you :)

I deeply feel that we don’t care about our health as it needsmuch as we should.

When illnes comes everyone run but it’s late.


When illnes comes everyone runs, but it’s too late.

When illness comes everyone runs but it’s too late.

When an illness comes everyone runs, but it’s too late.

But what can we do?


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If we work too much we have not time for us.


If we work too much we don't have not time for uourselves.

Alternatively: If we work too much we have no time for ourselves.

If we work too much we do not have not time for us.ourselves

If we work too much we havedo not have time for uourselves.

Maybe we need to prioritaze time over money, maybe this is the only drug we need.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Maybe we need to prioritaize time over money, maybe this is the only drug we need.

I had to use the internet to check I was correcting this spelling right. Don't worry, it is a difficult word to spell :)

Maybe we need to prioritaize time over money, m. Maybe this is the only drug we need.

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