May 13, 2022
Cover Letter 2
I have worked in several research teams during my master's and understand the importance of group projects. That is why I have been attempting to improve my group and language skills during these years. The two projects I worked on involved solving scientific problems, and I enjoyed taking part in brainstorming sessions with the team. During my internship and education at university, I have learned to utilize various types of identification apparatus such as spectroscopic instruments, and have some computational chemistry experience.
The CV is attached below the letter. I would greatly appreciate an opportunity to further discuss my research interests with you. I look forward to hearing from you.
Thank you for your time and consideration,
Best regards
Cover Letter 2
I have worked in several research teams during my mMaster's and understand the importance of group projects.
That is why I have been attemptworking ton improveing my group and language skills during theseover these past [#] years.
*attempting to improve
This is technically correct. I suggest "working on" because "attempt" implies trying without success, while the phrase "working on" implies progress towards your goal.
*during
The phrase "during these" implies a specific number of years, e.g. "During these seven years." I also suggest using "over these past" as a more natural way of saying the same thing. It also allows you to be more vague, as in "over these past few years."
The two projects I worked on involved solving scientific problems, and I enjoyed taking part in brainstorming sessions with the team.
During my internship and education at university, I have learned to utilize various types of identification apparatusresearch tools, such as spectroscopic instruments, and have some experience with computational chemistry experience.
*at university
I assume you're aiming at a British English, I believe. If you're aiming at an American audience, I would use "college" or specify the university, e.g. "Brighton University".
*identification apparatus
Technically correct, but less natural. Additionally, since you said "various types," I would suggest giving at least one more example.
TheMy CV is attached below the letter.
This phrasing is a bit more natural.
I would greatly appreciate an opportunity to further discuss my research interests with you.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Thank you for your time and consideration,
Best regards
Feedback
I checked your profile to see what English-speaking audience you were writing for (i.e. British, Australian, United States). I didn't see anything, so I assumed British, since England is closer to Persian-speaking countries than the United States.
Your grammar is technically correct. Several of my suggestions were just to make your text sound more natural.
May 14, 2022
Thank you very much. I thought some of my sentences are a bit unnatural, so your suggestions helped.
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I have worked in several research teams during my master's and understand the importance of group projects. I have worked in several research teams during my |
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That is why I have been attempting to improve my group and language skills during these years. That is why I have been *attempting to improve This is technically correct. I suggest "working on" because "attempt" implies trying without success, while the phrase "working on" implies progress towards your goal. *during The phrase "during these" implies a specific number of years, e.g. "During these seven years." I also suggest using "over these past" as a more natural way of saying the same thing. It also allows you to be more vague, as in "over these past few years." |
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The two projects I worked on involved solving scientific problems, and I enjoyed taking part in brainstorming sessions with the team. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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During my internship and education at university, I have learned to utilize various types of identification apparatus such as spectroscopic instruments, and have some computational chemistry experience. During my internship and education at university, I have learned to utilize various types of *at university I assume you're aiming at a British English, I believe. If you're aiming at an American audience, I would use "college" or specify the university, e.g. "Brighton University". *identification apparatus Technically correct, but less natural. Additionally, since you said "various types," I would suggest giving at least one more example. |
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The CV is attached below the letter.
This phrasing is a bit more natural. |
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I would greatly appreciate an opportunity to further discuss my research interests with you. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I look forward to hearing from you. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Thank you for your time and consideration, This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Best regards This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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