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serhan

Dec. 27, 2024

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Court Notice

I was invited Police Station regarding case notification which was sent October 2nd , 2024 in the first place. The notification was not delivered on that day because nobody opened the door when it arrived BCC's office. It was sent second time through Police Officers in order to verify whether BCC Turkey really exists at the address referred the trade register gazette. As managing director, I signed a document that confirms BCC Turkey conducts its activities at that address and informed them the new address in Istanbul. Next notification will be sent to address in Istanbul.

The lawsuit actually is between Bülent Korkmaz and Emrullah Şahin, who was BCC's client in 2020. You can see the invoices attached. BCC carried out inspections on gloves for Mr Emrullah Şahin. He sold the gloves to Mr Bülent Korkmaz using BCC's inspection reports. That's why judge has summoned BCC Turkey to the court in order to determine if BCC Turkey bears any responsibility in this matter.

There are two options we can follow now;
-Lawyers can involve in the lawsuit to clarify whether BCC Turkey bears any responsibility.
-You can stay silent about the matter

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Court Notice

I was invited to a/ the Police Station regarding a case notification which was sent on October 2nd , 2024 in the first place.

Added conjunctions for a better flow.

The notification was not delivered on that day because nobody opened the door when it arrivedwas supposed to be delivered at the BCC's office.

I would use delivered here instead of arrive

It was sent second time through Police Oofficers in order to verify whether BCC Turkey really exists at the address referred by the trade register gazette.

As managing director, I signed a document that confirms BCC Turkey conducts its activities at that address and informed them the new address in Istanbul.

Next notification will be sent to address in Istanbul.

The lawsuit actually is between Bülent Korkmaz and Emrullah Şahin, who was BCC's client in 2020.

You can see the invoices attached.

BCC carried out inspections on gloves for Mr Emrullah Şahin.

He sold the gloves to Mr Bülent Korkmaz using BCC's inspection reports.

That's why judge has summoned BCC Turkey to the court in order to determine if BCC Turkey bears any responsibility in this matter.

There are two options we can follow now;
-Lawyers can
be involved in the lawsuit to clarify whether BCC Turkey bears any responsibility.

-You can stay silent about the matter

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Loved reading this.
Your writing would benefit from conjunctions to make it flow better and make it easier for the reader to follow through.
Good job :-)

That's why judge has summoned BCC Turkey to the court in order to determine if BCC Turkey bears any responsibility in this matter.


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There are two options we can follow now; -Lawyers can involve in the lawsuit to clarify whether BCC Turkey bears any responsibility.


There are two options we can follow now;
-Lawyers can
be involved in the lawsuit to clarify whether BCC Turkey bears any responsibility.

-You can stay silent about the matter


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Court Notice


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I was invited Police Station regarding case notification which was sent October 2nd , 2024 in the first place.


I was invited to a/ the Police Station regarding a case notification which was sent on October 2nd , 2024 in the first place.

Added conjunctions for a better flow.

The notification was not delivered on that day because nobody opened the door when it arrived BCC's office.


The notification was not delivered on that day because nobody opened the door when it arrivedwas supposed to be delivered at the BCC's office.

I would use delivered here instead of arrive

It was sent second time through Police Officers in order to verify whether BCC Turkey really exists at the address referred the trade register gazette.


It was sent second time through Police Oofficers in order to verify whether BCC Turkey really exists at the address referred by the trade register gazette.

As managing director, I signed a document that confirms BCC Turkey conducts its activities at that address and informed them the new address in Istanbul.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Next notification will be sent to address in Istanbul.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The lawsuit actually is between Bülent Korkmaz and Emrullah Şahin, who was BCC's client in 2020.


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You can see the invoices attached.


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BCC carried out inspections on gloves for Mr Emrullah Şahin.


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He sold the gloves to Mr Bülent Korkmaz using BCC's inspection reports.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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