June 13, 2022
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We are going to file a lawsuit against Adam personally, Jack (business partnership) and CDC in Canada and Canada Global in Europe because they gave wrong contract / lack of information to us. We will go court in order for you to compensate our financial loss in full. Whole documents, e-mails, correspondences and messages in Whatsapp will be used as evidence in the court. You can be in touch with our legal team if you like.
We are going to file a lawsuit against Adam personally, Jack (business partnership) and, CDC in Canada, and Canada Global in Europe because they gave wrongus incorrect contract /s and lack of information to us.
Make sure to use a comma before 'and' in a sentence/list.
Also, you do not need to say 'and' until before the last subject in a list.
Lack of information regarding what? Would be good to be more specific
Incorrect instead of wrong to keep to the same register/formality
WholEntire documents, e-mails, correspondences, and messages infrom Whatsapp will be used as evidence in the court.
Entire rather than whole sounds more natural as a collocation
Again, do not forget a comma before 'and' in lists
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June 13, 2022
Thanks a lot :)
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We are going to file a lawsuit against Adam personally, Jack (business partnership) and CDC in Canada and Canada Global in Europe because they gave wrong contract / lack of information to us. We are going to file a lawsuit against Adam personally, Jack (business partnership) Make sure to use a comma before 'and' in a sentence/list. Also, you do not need to say 'and' until before the last subject in a list. Lack of information regarding what? Would be good to be more specific Incorrect instead of wrong to keep to the same register/formality |
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We will go court in order for you to compensate our financial loss in full. |
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Whole documents, e-mails, correspondences and messages in Whatsapp will be used as evidence in the court.
Entire rather than whole sounds more natural as a collocation Again, do not forget a comma before 'and' in lists |
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You can be in touch with our legal team if you like. |
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