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yanwang

Jan. 5, 2026

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Country music

I'm a fan of country music.
I can still remember the first country song I have ever heard. It was 'Springsteen' by Eric Church. One day in 2016, the loudspeaker in my room played that song randomly. I didn't know well about the music style but I immediately fell in love with it. I probably wouldn't even have knew who Bruce Springsteen was if I hadn't listened to the song by the way. Few years later I began to know what country music is and started to searching for more of it.
But here is the things. Country music community in china, is small and inactive.So I have to improve my English to access more country music resources, informations and to be ready for concerts if it's possible. My interest of country music is one of my biggest motivation for learning English.


我喜欢乡村音乐。
我还记得我听的第一首乡村音乐是埃瑞克丘奇的 斯普林斯汀。2016年的某天我的音响随机到了这首歌。我当时对音乐的各种风格不甚了解但是我一听就知道我喜欢这种风格。如果不是这首歌的话我也许连布鲁斯斯普林斯汀是谁都不知道。几年过后我知道了这种曲风叫做乡村音乐。于是我就开始寻找更多的乡村音乐来听。
但是事情是这样的,乡村音乐在中国没有一个很大的活跃的社区。所有如果我想获取更多的资源和资讯,我就必须得努力提高我的英语水平,有可能的话我还想去看演唱会。我对乡村音乐的喜爱是我学习英语的最大动力之一。

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I didn't know wellanything about the music stylgenre but I immediately fell in love with it.

I probably wouldn't even have knewown who Bruce Springsteen was if I hadn't listened to the song by the way.

FA few years later I began to knowlearn about what country music is and started to searching for more of it.

You can also say "to search".

In general you should never conjugate a verb if it follows "to" unless it is a gerund.
For example: "to run", "to eat" versus "to running", "to eating"

But here is the things.

You can also say "The thing is, " and combine this with the next sentence.

CThe country music community in china, is small and inot very active.

I'm assuming the community has a little activity because you mention that there are some people in it. However, if it truly is inactive (no activity at all) then ignore my change here

So I have to improve my English to access more country music resources, informations and to be ready for concerts if it's possible.

I think "resources" implies "information" already. Also "information" is uncountable so it's never pluralized

My interest of incountry music is one of my biggest motivations for learning English.

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Nice job, that's a good motivation to learn. It would be great for you to actually be able to attend country concerts in person.

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yanwang

Jan. 6, 2026

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Thanks,🤠 I really do. As long as i start making money.

I probably wouldn't even have knewown who Bruce Springsteen was if I hadn't listened to the song by the way.

FA few years later I began to know what country music is and started to searching for more of it.

ButHowever, here is the things.

It's better to use "however" to start the sentences for more formal writing.

CThe country music community in cChina, is small and inactive.

So I have to improve my English to access more country music resources, informations and to be ready for concerts if it's possible.

It's better to use "as a result" instead of "so" for more formal sentences.

My interest ofin country music is one of my biggest motivations for learning English.

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I'm not the biggest fan of country music, but I like Orville Peck. He's young and modern.

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yanwang

Jan. 6, 2026

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I found some of his song to listen. He is hot.

I can still remember the first country song I have ever heard.

I didn't know wellmuch about the music styleat genre of music but I immediately fell in love with it.

'Style' isn't wrong, but it's also common to use 'genre' in reference to music

I probably wouldn't even have knewown who Bruce Springsteen was if I hadn't listened to the song by the way.

FA few years later I began to knowlearned what country music iwas and started to searching for more of it.

But here is the things.

CThe country music community in cChina, is small and inactive.

So I have to improve my English to access more country music resources, and informations, and to be ready forattend concerts if it's possible.

My interest ofin country music is one of my biggest motivations for learning English.

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Great job! That's a good reason to keep learning :)

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yanwang

Jan. 6, 2026

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Thanks 😁

Country music


I'm a fan of country music.


I can still remember the first country song I have ever heard.


I can still remember the first country song I have ever heard.

It was 'Springsteen' by Eric Church.


One day in 2016, the loudspeaker in my room played that song randomly.


I didn't know well about the music style but I immediately fell in love with it.


I didn't know wellmuch about the music styleat genre of music but I immediately fell in love with it.

'Style' isn't wrong, but it's also common to use 'genre' in reference to music

I didn't know wellanything about the music stylgenre but I immediately fell in love with it.

I probably wouldn't even have knew who Bruce Springsteen was if I hadn't listened to the song by the way.


I probably wouldn't even have knewown who Bruce Springsteen was if I hadn't listened to the song by the way.

I probably wouldn't even have knewown who Bruce Springsteen was if I hadn't listened to the song by the way.

I probably wouldn't even have knewown who Bruce Springsteen was if I hadn't listened to the song by the way.

But here is the things.


But here is the things.

ButHowever, here is the things.

It's better to use "however" to start the sentences for more formal writing.

But here is the things.

You can also say "The thing is, " and combine this with the next sentence.

Few years later I began to know what country music is and started to searching for more of it.


FA few years later I began to knowlearned what country music iwas and started to searching for more of it.

FA few years later I began to know what country music is and started to searching for more of it.

FA few years later I began to knowlearn about what country music is and started to searching for more of it.

You can also say "to search". In general you should never conjugate a verb if it follows "to" unless it is a gerund. For example: "to run", "to eat" versus "to running", "to eating"

Country music community in china, is small and inactive.


CThe country music community in cChina, is small and inactive.

CThe country music community in cChina, is small and inactive.

CThe country music community in china, is small and inot very active.

I'm assuming the community has a little activity because you mention that there are some people in it. However, if it truly is inactive (no activity at all) then ignore my change here

So I have to improve my English to access more country music resources, informations and to be ready for concerts if it's possible.


So I have to improve my English to access more country music resources, and informations, and to be ready forattend concerts if it's possible.

So I have to improve my English to access more country music resources, informations and to be ready for concerts if it's possible.

It's better to use "as a result" instead of "so" for more formal sentences.

So I have to improve my English to access more country music resources, informations and to be ready for concerts if it's possible.

I think "resources" implies "information" already. Also "information" is uncountable so it's never pluralized

My interest of country music is one of my biggest motivation for learning English.


My interest ofin country music is one of my biggest motivations for learning English.

My interest ofin country music is one of my biggest motivations for learning English.

My interest of incountry music is one of my biggest motivations for learning English.

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