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Ten years ago, Turkish military shot down a Russian war plane as the plane violated Turkey's airspace. Then Russia started some sanctions against Türkiye such as avoiding Russians to have a holiday in Turkish cities or intimidated Türkiye's goverment into cutting off natural gas they supplied. In the end, Turkish goverment apologised family of pilot in the plane and paid a compensations. Now, Russia shot Turkish ships with a missile and Türkiye's The Ministry of Foreign Affair did nothing.This is way too upsetting. Unfortunatelly Türkiye does not have enough power to make Russia do the same thing that Russia made Turkey do ten years ago.
Countries's Power.
Ten years ago, the Turkish military shot down a Russian war plane as the plane violated Turkey's airspace.
Then, Russia started some sanctions against Türkiye s. Such as avoid, prohibiting Russians to have a holidayfrom vacationing in Turkish cities orand intimidateding Türkiye's government into cutting off natural gas they supplied.
I broke it into two sentences, because it was starting to become a run-on sentence. "Avoiding" makes it sound optional and is too soft of a word for this context.
In the end, the Turkish government apologised to the family of pilot in the planeilot and paid a compensations.
"in the plane" isn't needed in the sentence. It's already understood from the rest of your paragraph.
Now, Russia has shot Turkish ships with a missile and Türkiye's The Ministry of Foreign Affair dids has done nothing.
This is way too upsetting.
Unfortunatelly, Türkiye does not have enough power to make Russia do the same thing that Russia made TurkeyTurkey had to do ten years ago.
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Great job! Mostly just some missing grammar.
Countries's Power.
Ten years ago, Turkish military shot down a Russian war plane as the plane violated Turkey's airspace.
Then Russia started some sanctions against Türkiye such as avoiding Russians to have a holiday in Turkish cities or intimidated Türkiye's goverment into cutting off natural gas they supplied.
InAt the end, Turkish goverment apologised family of pilot in the plane and paid a compensations.
Now, Russia shot Turkish ships with a missile and Türkiye's The Ministry of Foreign Affair did nothing.
This is way too upsetting.
Unfortunatelly Türkiye does not have enough power to make Russia do the same thing that Russia made Turkey do ten years ago.
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Ten years ago, Turkish military shot down a Russian war plane as the plane violated Turkey's airspace. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Ten years ago, the Turkish military shot down a Russian war plane as the plane violated Turkey's airspace. |
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Then Russia started some sanctions against Türkiye such as avoiding Russians to have a holiday in Turkish cities or intimidated Türkiye's goverment into cutting off natural gas they supplied. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Then, Russia started some sanctions against Türkiye I broke it into two sentences, because it was starting to become a run-on sentence. "Avoiding" makes it sound optional and is too soft of a word for this context. |
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In the end, Turkish goverment apologised family of pilot in the plane and paid a compensations.
In the end, the Turkish government apologised to the family of "in the plane" isn't needed in the sentence. It's already understood from the rest of your paragraph. |
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Now, Russia shot Turkish ships with a missile and Türkiye's The Ministry of Foreign Affair did nothing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Now, Russia has shot Turkish ships with a missile and Türkiye's |
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This is way too upsetting. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Unfortunatelly Türkiye does not have enough power to make Russia do the same thing that Russia made Turkey do ten years ago. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Unfortunatel |
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