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kyoko

Jan. 16, 2020

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Countries I want to visit

If I were still single, I would travel around the world and see my friends in several countries.
I’d like to travel to Sweden, Australia, New Zealand, Canada, the United States, Iran, and Thai.
So many countries!!


もしまだ独身だったら、世界中を旅行し、いろんな国にいる友達に会いたいです。スウェーデン、オーストラリア、ニュージーランド、カナダ、アメリカ、イラン、そしてタイに行きたいです。たくさんの国だ〜!!

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Countries I want to visit

If I were still single, I would like to travel around the world and see my friends in several countries.

I don't know if you want to express desire in this sentence, but if so then perhaps this would sound more natural. The sentence is perfectly fine otherwise.

I’d like to travel to Sweden, Australia, New Zealand, Canada, the United States, Iran, and Thai.land

So many countries!

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I've seen and heard that those countries are very beautiful and visiting friends across the globe is also always a great time.
Who knows, maybe in the future you can go together with your loved ones ^-^

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kyoko

Jan. 16, 2020

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Thank you for the correction!
Yes, I hope I will travel with my husband one day... but I know he doesn’t want to go anywhere that don’t have Japanese electronic toilet!
Ok, I’ll bring it to everywhere with him! 🤣

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Countries I want to visit

If I were still single, I would travel around the world and see my friends in several countries.

I’d like to travel to Sweden, Australia, New Zealand, Canada, the United States, Iran, and Thailand.

So many countries!

!

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kyoko

Jan. 16, 2020

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Oh, I mistook the country name!😱
Thanks for the correction!

Countries I want to visit


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If I were still single, I would travel around the world and see my friends in several countries.


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If I were still single, I would like to travel around the world and see my friends in several countries.

I don't know if you want to express desire in this sentence, but if so then perhaps this would sound more natural. The sentence is perfectly fine otherwise.

I’d like to travel to Sweden, Australia, New Zealand, Canada, the United States, Iran, and Thai.


I’d like to travel to Sweden, Australia, New Zealand, Canada, the United States, Iran, and Thailand.

I’d like to travel to Sweden, Australia, New Zealand, Canada, the United States, Iran, and Thai.land

So many countries!


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