June 27, 2020
"Could you help me by fixing my mistakes?"
My main job is to evaluate inheritances for put together an inheritance tax return.
For example, research the value at the time of inheritance such as insurances, stocks and bonds, investment trusts and real estates and so on.
I also research depositing and withdrawing accounts from five years ago until two months after decedent died.
主に相続税申告書作成のために、相続財産の評価をしています。
例えば、保険、有価証券、不動産など、相続時の価値を調べます。
また、過去5年間遡って相続発生後2ヶ月後までの預金の流れも調査します。
"Could you help me by fixing my mistakes?"
My main job is to evaluate inheritances forto put together an inheritance tax return.
Or “for putting together”
For example, I research the value at the time of inheritance such as, which includes the value of insurance policies, stocks and bonds, investment trusts and, real estates and so on.
“Real estate” and “insurance” are generally always singular. “Insurance policy” should be used to talk about the value of specific products.
I also research depositings and withdrawingals from accounts from five years ago until two months after the decedent died.
June 28, 2020
Thank you for the corrections and an advice.
"Could you help me by fixing my mistakes?"
My main job is to evaluate inheritances forin order to put together an inheritance tax return.
For example, research the value atof the time of inheritance such aat the time, which includes insurances, stocks and bonds, investment trusts and, real estates, and so on.
I also research depositings and withdrawingals from accounts, from five years ago until two months after decedent died.
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This is very technical language but you did well overall. I had to double check the spelling of 'withdrawal' and the suitability of the word 'decedent' myself and Im a native speaker.
June 27, 2020
Thank you for the correction and breaking it down.
I learned so much.
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For example, research the value at the time of inheritance such as insurances, stocks and bonds, investment trusts and real estates and so on. For example, research the value For example, I research the value at the time of inheritance “Real estate” and “insurance” are generally always singular. “Insurance policy” should be used to talk about the value of specific products. |
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