March 30, 2025
could you correct this text for me.
Hello there, I'm Berg. My real name is Claudeberguison, but Berg is my nickname. I currently live in Pará, but I grew up in Marabá and still live there. I've been married for 13 years; unfortunately, we don't have children yet. Finally, in my free time, I love playing chess at the mall and riding a bike.
"Olá, sou o Berg. Meu nome verdadeiro é Claudeberguison, mas Berg é meu apelido. Atualmente, moro no Pará, mas cresci em Marabá e ainda moro lá. Estou casado há 13 anos; infelizmente, ainda não temos filhos. Por fim, no meu tempo livre, adoro jogar xadrez no shopping e andar de bicicleta."
cCould you correct this text for me.?
Hello there, I'm Berg.
My real name is Claudeberguison, but Berg is my nickname.
I currently live in Pará, but I grew up in Marabá and still live there.
I've been married for 13 years; unfortunately, we don't have children yet.
This is perfectly correct, but a native would probably add "any" as in "we don't have any children yet".
FinalLastly, in my free time, I love playing chess at the mall and riding amy bike.
Be careful, the word "finally" in English has a slightly different meaning than in latin languages.
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This text was very well written. I made some improvements but it's really almost perfect as is.
Hello there,. I'm Berg.
Technically, the (,) should be a (.) if you were writing formally, because they are two separate sentences. But it is not a big mistake and I would otherwise say this is correct and 100% fine if you are not writing formally 👍.
Finally, in my free time, I love playing chess at the mall and riding amy bike.
This is correct, but I just want you to be aware that "my bike" is more common and sounds more natural.
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I would say this is essentially perfect with no major mistakes! Keep up the good work ✨
March 31, 2025
thaks brothes and sisters.
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could you correct this text for me.
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Hello there, I'm Berg. Hello there Technically, the (,) should be a (.) if you were writing formally, because they are two separate sentences. But it is not a big mistake and I would otherwise say this is correct and 100% fine if you are not writing formally 👍. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My real name is Claudeberguison, but Berg is my nickname. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I currently live in Pará, but I grew up in Marabá and still live there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I've been married for 13 years; unfortunately, we don't have children yet. I've been married for 13 years; unfortunately, we don't have children yet. This is perfectly correct, but a native would probably add "any" as in "we don't have any children yet". |
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Finally, in my free time, I love playing chess at the mall and riding a bike. Finally, in my free time, I love playing chess at the mall and riding This is correct, but I just want you to be aware that "my bike" is more common and sounds more natural.
Be careful, the word "finally" in English has a slightly different meaning than in latin languages. |
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