May 19, 2020
Could you correct this email and mark some inharmonic parts?
Hi Lisa,
I hope you are doing fine.
Unfortunately, I have some bad news. We need to cancel our long-awaited trip to Europe.
Due to the membership to my tennis club, I am meant to participate in an important sports event which has been brought forward unpredictably.
I’m sorry for that and was really looking forward to our trip. But: Postponed is not abandoned!
Greetings,
John
Could you correct this email and mark some inharmonic parts?
Hi Lisa,
I hope you are doing fine.
Unfortunately, I have some bad news.
We need to cancel our long-awaited trip to Europe.
Due to the membership to my tennis club membership, I am meant to participate in an important sports event which has been brought forward unpredictablyunexpectedly moved forward.
The only important change is the first one. The rest of the sentence is correct both ways.
I’m sorry for that and was really looking forward to our trip.
But: Ppostponed is not abandoned!
This sentence is a little modern. It departs a little from formal grammar. Another member gave you a more traditional option which is good. However, I think this phrasing also fits the tone of the letter well. It's like the thought of traveling with Lisa is so exciting to John that John becomes less formal.
GreetingsSincerely,
You can search for 'letter closing examples' to see many options. 'Sincerely' is common but John may want something fancier.
John
Feedback
Nicely done! This is a great example of a personal but somewhat formal letter.
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Could you correct this email and mark some inharmonic parts? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Hi Lisa, This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I hope you are doing fine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Unfortunately, I have some bad news. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We need to cancel our long-awaited trip to Europe. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Due to the membership to my tennis club, I am meant to participate in an important sports event which has been brought forward unpredictably. Due to The only important change is the first one. The rest of the sentence is correct both ways. |
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I’m sorry for that and was really looking forward to our trip. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But: Postponed is not abandoned! But: This sentence is a little modern. It departs a little from formal grammar. Another member gave you a more traditional option which is good. However, I think this phrasing also fits the tone of the letter well. It's like the thought of traveling with Lisa is so exciting to John that John becomes less formal. |
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Greetings,
You can search for 'letter closing examples' to see many options. 'Sincerely' is common but John may want something fancier. |
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John This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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