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julia00

Feb. 23, 2020

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Could you check my English?

I have heard many times this song on the radio before.
So I have tried to translate.

You gave me butterflies in my stomach when I saw you first time
I longed for the adult wistful love when I was 21 years old
I felt that my makeup don't good on me because I was overdoing
The beginning of love

I can't help it because I like you a lot

give me a big hug
Sometimes, I would say selfish
Because I want to you hold hands all the time.
I love to burst into laughter

He always strong but I feel so happy when you sleep in my arms
I need you
I feel like that makes us stronger when protect something
The beginning of love

I can't help it because I like you a lot
But my heart aches a bit
The time that can't meet is the magic of bringing nice love
My heart is always looking for you

I can't help it because I like you a lot
I've never felt like this before
I want to still be by your side, please
Expressing my honest feelings is hard


以前この曲をよくラジオで聞きました。
ちょっと翻訳してみました。

最初に見かけたとき 胸がキュンとときめいた
大人な恋に憧れた21
ちょっと無理をしてたメイクは私から浮いて見えた
恋のはじまり

好きで好きでしかたなくて
君にギュッとして欲しくて
たまにわがまま言うけど
ずっと二人で手を繋ぎたいから
ふいに笑った君が愛しくて

いつも強気な君 私の腕で眠るとき
大きな幸せを感じるの I need you
人って何かを守る時に強くなれる気がする
恋の始まり

好きで好きでしかたなくて
だけどちょっと切なくて
二人会えない時間は恋を素敵に育てる魔法
いつも心は君を呼んでいる

好きで好きでしかたなくて
こんな気持ちはじめてで
お願い まだそばにいたい
なんて素直に言えないから

Corrections

I have heard many times this song on the radio many times before.

You gave me butterflies in my stomach when I saw you for the first time

I felt that my makeup doidn't good on me because I was overdothinking

Sometimes, I would say I'm selfish

Because I want to you hold hands with you all the time.

HYou're always strong but I feel so happy when you sleep in my arms

I feel like that makes us stronger when protecting something makes us stronger

TWhe time that can't meet is the magic of bringing nice loven we can't meet our love grows magically

I don't quite know what this is supposed to say...

I still want to still be by your side, please

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julia00

Feb. 24, 2020

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Thank you for the correction.

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Could you check my English?

I have heard many times this song on the radio many times before.

You gave me butterflies in my stomach when I saw you for the first time

I felt that my makeup doidn't look good on me because I was overdoing it

Sometimes, I would say selfish things

Because I want to you hold your hands all the time.

HYou're always strong but I feel so happy when you sleep in my arms

I feel like that makes uswe are stronger when protecting something

TWhe time that can't meet is the magic of bringing nice loven we can't meet our love grows magically

... or something. I dunno.

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julia00

Feb. 23, 2020

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Thank you for the corrections.
That’s really helpful.

Could you check my English?


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I have heard many times this song on the radio before.


I have heard many times this song on the radio many times before.

I have heard many times this song on the radio many times before.

So I have tried to translate.


You gave me butterflies in my stomach when I saw you first time


You gave me butterflies in my stomach when I saw you for the first time

You gave me butterflies in my stomach when I saw you for the first time

I longed for the adult wistful love when I was 21 years old


I felt that my makeup don't good on me because I was overdoing


I felt that my makeup doidn't look good on me because I was overdoing it

I felt that my makeup doidn't good on me because I was overdothinking

The beginning of love


I can't help it because I like you a lot


give me a big hug


Sometimes, I would say selfish


Sometimes, I would say selfish things

Sometimes, I would say I'm selfish

Because I want to you hold hands all the time.


Because I want to you hold your hands all the time.

Because I want to you hold hands with you all the time.

I love to burst into laughter


He always strong but I feel so happy when you sleep in my arms


HYou're always strong but I feel so happy when you sleep in my arms

HYou're always strong but I feel so happy when you sleep in my arms

I need you


I feel like that makes us stronger when protect something


I feel like that makes uswe are stronger when protecting something

I feel like that makes us stronger when protecting something makes us stronger

The beginning of love


I can't help it because I like you a lot


But my heart aches a bit


The time that can't meet is the magic of bringing nice love


TWhe time that can't meet is the magic of bringing nice loven we can't meet our love grows magically

... or something. I dunno.

TWhe time that can't meet is the magic of bringing nice loven we can't meet our love grows magically

I don't quite know what this is supposed to say...

My heart is always looking for you


I can't help it because I like you a lot


I've never felt like this before


I want to still be by your side, please


I still want to still be by your side, please

Expressing my honest feelings is hard


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