May 2, 2023
Could u pls help me revise this thanks letter？Thank you
Hi P,
I really appreciate your professional coach and insightful sharing in the past 8 months of my 1st rotation.
With your coach, I gained much experience in collecting our competitor’s intelligence, analyzing new product’s development strategy, digging insight from GlobalData, etc. These works truly enhance my capabilities in structure thinking, storytelling, and presentation skills. Most important, I’ll keep it in mind that we should highlight key messages in each presentation.
In addition, you’re always willing to share what you’ve learned and thought with us. For example, you’ve shared 4 segments of CVS’s merchandise, as well as your findings from market visit. These provide us new perspectives to rethink the whole thing and will expand our way of thinking.
All in all, thanks for your help and influence in the very beginning of my career. And I’ll keep building up my aspiration, capability, and engagement level in the future.
Sincerely wish you a healthy, happy, and balanced life.
Best Regards,
E
With your coach, I gained mucha lot of experience in collecting our competitor’s intelligence, analyzing new product’s development strategyies, digging for insight from GlobalData, etc.
Most importantly, I’ll keep it in mind that we should highlight key messages in each presentation.
For example, you’ve shared 4 segments of CVS’s merchandise, as well as your findings from the market visit.
And I’ll keep building up my aspiration, capability, and engagement level in the future.
Sincerely I wish you a healthy, happy, and balanced life.
May 21, 2023
Thank you very much, Kizzi🥰🥰🥰
Could u pls help me revise this thanks letter？Thank you
Hi P,
I really appreciate your professional coaching and insightful sharing in the past 8 months of my 1first rotation.
Writing out "first" is more formal than saying "1st"
With your coaching, I gained much experience in collecting our competitor’s intelligence, analyzing new product’s' development strategy, digging insight from GlobalData, etc.
If you mean one product, then I would say "analyzing the new product's development strategy." For multiple products, the apostrophe goes after the S because the word is plural and possessive
Theseis work has truly enhanced my capabilities in structured thinking, storytelling, and presentation skills.
Most importantly, I’ll keep it in mind that we should highlight key messages in each presentation.
For example, you’ve shared 4 segments of CVS’s merchandise, as well as your findings from market visit.
These provide us with new perspectives to rethink the whole thing and will expand our way of thinking.
And I’ll keep building up my aspiration, capability, and engagement level in the future.
SI sincerely wish you a healthy, happy, and balanced life.
Best Regards,
E
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A very nice thank you letter!
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I really appreciate your professional coach and insightful sharing in the past 8 months of my 1st rotation. I really appreciate your professional coaching and insightful sharing in the past 8 months of my Writing out "first" is more formal than saying "1st" |
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With your coach, I gained much experience in collecting our competitor’s intelligence, analyzing new product’s development strategy, digging insight from GlobalData, etc. With your coaching, I gained much experience in collecting our competitor’s intelligence, analyzing new product If you mean one product, then I would say "analyzing the new product's development strategy." For multiple products, the apostrophe goes after the S because the word is plural and possessive With your coach, I gained |
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These works truly enhance my capabilities in structure thinking, storytelling, and presentation skills. Th |
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Most important, I’ll keep it in mind that we should highlight key messages in each presentation. Most importantly, I’ll keep Most importantly, I’ll keep it in mind that we should highlight key messages in each presentation. |
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In addition, you’re always willing to share what you’ve learned and thought with us. |
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For example, you’ve shared 4 segments of CVS’s merchandise, as well as your findings from market visit. This sentence has been marked as perfect! For example, you’ve shared 4 segments of CVS’s merchandise, as well as your findings from the market visit. |
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These provide us new perspectives to rethink the whole thing and will expand our way of thinking. These provide us with new perspectives to rethink the whole thing and will expand our way of thinking. |
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All in all, thanks for your help and influence in the very beginning of my career. |
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And I’ll keep building up my aspiration, capability, and engagement level in the future.
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Sincerely wish you a healthy, happy, and balanced life.
Sincerely I wish you a healthy, happy, and balanced life. |
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