Correct this email and let it sound more formal, pls. Thx.ease. Thank you.

I hope you are fine.doing well.

My name is Dominik Doe, and I am interested in your International Internship Program.

Especially, the opportunities page on your website arouspeaked my interest immensely.

However, some questions occurred duringto me while reading through your website which I would like to gethave answered before applying:

Could you give me a fewsome examples, please?

Are there any plans to realizintroduce them in the future?

Yours sincerely,

Dear Sir or /Madam:,

https://forum.wordreference.com/threads/dear-sir-or-madam-dear-sir-madam.470417/
I would also prefer “Dear Hiring Manager” or something similar.

I hope you are fine.

This seems extraneous in a business email, unless you have already established a connection with the person before.

Especially tThe opportunities page on your website especially aroused my interest immensely.

However, some questions occurred duringto me while I was reading through your website, which I would like to gethave answered before applying:

“Occur” needs an indirect object when it means something closer to “realize” than to “happen.”

You arr webpage talkings about “special projects” which are assigned for a 6 six-month rotation.

Are there any plans to realizhave them in the future?

We do “realize” possibilities, but here it doesn’t work because “exclude” suggests that there is no such possibility at the moment.

18 months ago, I did amy first internship at a BMW plant in my region for ten weeks.

One of your requirements is that ithis prior internship lasted at least three months.

Is therWill I have a chance to participate in your Program either wayregardless?

“Either way” suggests that more than one scenario has been put out.

Thanks you in advance for answering the questions.

“Thanks” is rather informal. It can be fine if a more informal tone has been set, but without such context I wouldn’t use it.

Yours sincerely,

Yes, a comma is necessary for closing remarks of this variety.

Dear Sir or Madam:,

I hope you are finedoing well.

Especially tThe opportunities page on your website especially aroused my interest immensely.

However, some questions occurred during reading through your websiteafter reading through the information, I have a couple of questions which I would like to get answeredask before applying:.

You are talking aboutFirst of all, I saw details regarding “special projects” which are assigned for a 6 month rotation.

Are there any plans to realizestart them in the future?

18 months ago, I did a first internship at a BMW plant in my region for ten weeks.

this is correct, but "region" sounds kind of weird. Was it in your state or your city, for example? If you can't find a replacement word, I would replace "in my region" to "nearby"

One of yourthe requirements is that it lastedthe duration of the internship should have been at least three months.

Is there a chance to participate in your Pprogram either anyway?

Thanks you in advance for answering the questions.

Yours sSincerely,