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Oct. 19, 2023

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Correct the lyrics

They'll find her at dawn, like a Camellia,
Where the temples stand so rare,
No need for this vessel, she knew,
And now the sky's her hue.

'Neath cedar's song, on oak knees,
Within the silver breeze,
Her legs entwined by vines -
The forest's melancholic signs

(Chorus) 5
Twilight, violets, bruises, scars

Even in daylight, the moon lit her face,
Her hands like glass flowers
In an ethereal embrace.


Hi, please help me to correct the lyrics of this song.
I would be very grateful. I am ready for constant cooperation.

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Correct the lyrics

They'll find her at dawn, like a Camellia, Where the temples stand so rare, No need for this vessel, she knew, And now the sky's her hue.

'Neath cedar's song, on oak knees, Within the silver breeze, Her legs entwined by vines - The forest's melancholic signs (Chorus) 5 Twilight, violets, bruises, scars Even in daylight, the moon lit her face, Her hands like glass flowers In an ethereal embrace.

Correct the lyrics

They'll find her at dawn, like a Camellia,
Where the temples stand so rare,

NThere is no need for this vessel, she knew,
And now the sky's her hue.

Correct the lyrics


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They'll find her at dawn, like a Camellia, Where the temples stand so rare, No need for this vessel, she knew, And now the sky's her hue.


They'll find her at dawn, like a Camellia,
Where the temples stand so rare,

NThere is no need for this vessel, she knew,
And now the sky's her hue.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

'Neath cedar's song, on oak knees, Within the silver breeze, Her legs entwined by vines - The forest's melancholic signs (Chorus) 5 Twilight, violets, bruises, scars Even in daylight, the moon lit her face, Her hands like glass flowers In an ethereal embrace.


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