Jan. 28, 2020
Coronavirus
In Japan, two more people were confirmed infected with the new coronavirus today. This makes a total of six people. One of them has never been to Wuhan, according to the article. He is a bus driver who drove for tourists from Wuhan.
I will wear a mask outside the house from tomorrow. I hope the situation gets under control as soon as possible.
I will'm going to wear a mask outside the house fromstarting tomorrow.
"I'm going to (do smth)" is good for stating intentions. Though, it's really an alternative word choice.
I hope the situation getsis brought under control as soon as possible.
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Me too. I think a few people here in the US were infected, but hopefully for here and Japan, it will remain just that--a few people. Take care!
Jan. 30, 2020
Thank you very much for your comment! You, too.
He is a bus driver who drove for tourists who came from Wuhan.
Just to confirm, the bus driver himself never went to Wuhan but some of the passengers on his bus came from Wuhan?
彼は武漢から来た観光客を運転したバスの運転手です。
I'm not an editor or grammar expert but I feel having two "who" in a single noun phrase sounds a little awkward. I think "He is a bus driver who drove tourists coming from Wuhan" sounds a bit better.
I will wear a mask outside the house from tomorrow.
Your sentence is perfect, I just want to suggest an alternative: "I have decided it's best to wear a mask outside the house from tomorrow."
Jan. 29, 2020
He is a bus driver who drove for tourists who came from Wuhan.
the bus driver himself never went to Wuhan but some of the passengers on his bus came from Wuhan? > Yes, that's what I was trying to say.
Jan. 30, 2020
I've decided to wear a mask too. No matter how low the risk may be, it's not worth taking.
In Japan, two more people were confirmed to be infected with the new coronavirus today.
This makes a total of six people.
One of them has never been to Wuhan, according to the article.
He is a bus driver who drove for tourists from Wuhan.
I will wear a mask outside the house from tomorrow.
I hope the situation gets under control as soon as possible.
Jan. 29, 2020
Thank you so much for correcting!
Coronavirus
In Japan, two more people were confirmed [to be] infected with the new coronavirus today.
This makes a total of six people. [in Japan who are infected with the virus]
How you wrote it made seem like the whole world only has 6 people with the virus. I also made your description more detailed.
One of those peoplem has never been to Wuhan, according to the article.
He is a bus driver who drove for tourists from Wuhan.
I will wear a mask outside the house from[starting] tomorrow.
From tomorrowは正しいですが starting tomorrowの方が自然に聞こえます
I hope the situation gets under control as soon as possible.
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Be careful! My aunt is in Shanghai and she has been wearing a mask every time she went outside (and didn't go outside for like 4 days).
Good job on today's entry.
Jan. 29, 2020
Thank you very much for your correction! I hope that your aunt will be ok.
Jan. 30, 2020
I've decided to wear a mask too. No matter how low the risk may be, it's not worth taking.
Jan. 30, 2020
I've decided to wear a mask too. No matter how low the risk may be, it's not worth taking.
I agree. Let's stay safe.
In Japan, two more people were confirmed to be infected with the new coronavirus today.
Your sentence is correct, but I think a 'to be' there flows a bit better.
This makes a total of six people.
One of them has never been to Wuhan, according to the article.
He is a bus driver who drove for tourists from Wuhan.
I will wear a mask outside the house from tomorrow.
I hope the situation gets under control as soon as possible.
Jan. 29, 2020
Thanks a lot for your correction!
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