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SummerTeaWater

March 11, 2022

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Corona virus at home

There are eight members in my house, so I am always worried that we have more chance to expose the COVID-19.

Today my second son didn't pass the self-verification kit of the virus.

He has a high fever now, and he says that he has a sore throat.

My wife stays with him, and all other members wear their masks even in our house.

Other sons are going to sleep in the different rooms for preventing the virus.

I hope there is no more infected person.

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Corona virus at home

There are eight members in my house, so I am always worried that we have morea higher chance tof exposure theo COVID-19.

Today my second son didn't pass the self-verification kit of the virus.

He has a high fever now, and he says that he has a sore throat.

My wife stays with him, and all other members wear their masks even in our house.

Our other sons are going to sleep in the different rooms forto prevent spreading/catching the virus.

I hope there is no moreno one else is infected person.

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Very good writing, stay well! :)

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SummerTeaWater

March 12, 2022

402

Thank you so much!

There are eight members in my house, so I am always worried that we have more chance tof exposure theo COVID-19.

Other sons are going to sleep in the different rooms for preventing the virus.

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SummerTeaWater

March 12, 2022

402

Thank you so much.

There are eight memberspeople in my house, so I am always worried that we have more chance toa greater chance of being exposed theo COVID-19.

The first phrase isn't wrong, but it sounds more natural to either say "There are eight people in my house" or "My household has eight members."

Today my second son didn't pass the self-verification kit of the virus.

He has a high fever now, and he says that he has a sore throat.

My wife stays with him, and all other members wear their masks even in our house.

Our other sons are going to sleep in the different rooms for preventing the spread of the virus.

To sound a little more natural, you could also say "going to sleep in different rooms to avoid catching the virus."

I hope there is no moreno one else is infected person.

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SummerTeaWater

March 12, 2022

402

Thank you very much.

Today my second son didn't pass the self-verification kit of the virus.


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Corona virus at home


Corona virus at home

There are eight members in my house, so I am always worried that we have more chance to expose the COVID-19.


There are eight memberspeople in my house, so I am always worried that we have more chance toa greater chance of being exposed theo COVID-19.

The first phrase isn't wrong, but it sounds more natural to either say "There are eight people in my house" or "My household has eight members."

There are eight members in my house, so I am always worried that we have more chance tof exposure theo COVID-19.

There are eight members in my house, so I am always worried that we have morea higher chance tof exposure theo COVID-19.

He has a high fever now, and he says that he has a sore throat.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My wife stays with him, and all other members wear their masks even in our house.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Other sons are going to sleep in the different rooms for preventing the virus.


Our other sons are going to sleep in the different rooms for preventing the spread of the virus.

To sound a little more natural, you could also say "going to sleep in different rooms to avoid catching the virus."

Other sons are going to sleep in the different rooms for preventing the virus.

Our other sons are going to sleep in the different rooms forto prevent spreading/catching the virus.

I hope there is no more infected person.


I hope there is no moreno one else is infected person.

I hope there is no moreno one else is infected person.

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