Aug. 14, 2021
Corona Vaccine
Today, my youngest son is going to receive his second dose of the Corona vaccine, Moderna. The second dose of the Corona vaccine seems to have a stronger side effects, so I prepared an antipyretic. Moderna seems to have a stronger side reaction than Pfizer, but I heard that Moderna is more effective.
今日、次男はモデルナの2回目のワクチン接種を受けます。2回目の接種の方が副反応が強いみたいですので、解熱剤の準備をしました。ファイザーよりモデルナの方が副反応が強いみたいですが、モデルナの方が効果があると聞きました。
Corona Vaccine
Today, my youngest son is going to receive his second dose of the Corona vaccine, Moderna.
This sentence is a little more clear: "Today my youngest son is going to receive his second dose of the Moderna Corona vaccine."
The second dose of the Corona vaccine seems to have a stronger side effects, so I prepared an antipyretic.
Moderna seems to have a stronger side reactioneffects than Pfizer, but I heard that Moderna is more effective.
You can use either, "have stronger side effects" or "cause stronger reactions". "Side reaction" doesn't really have a meaning.
"A stronger side effect" makes the sentence definite, meaning there's a specific and singular side effect being mentioned that the reader knows about. Since the side effect is general, that's why my correction is plural.
Aug. 14, 2021
Thank you!
Corona Vaccine
Today, my youngest son is going to receive his second dose of the Corona vaccine, Moderna.
The second dose of the Corona vaccine seems to have a stronger side effects, so I prepared an antipyretic.
Moderna seems to have a stronger side reaction than Pfizer, but I heard that Moderna is more effective.
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I hope your son was alright after his vaccine.
Aug. 14, 2021
Thank you!
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Today, my youngest son is going to receive his second dose of the Corona vaccine, Moderna. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Today, my youngest son is going to receive his second dose of the Corona vaccine, Moderna. This sentence is a little more clear: "Today my youngest son is going to receive his second dose of the Moderna Corona vaccine." |
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The second dose of the Corona vaccine seems to have a stronger side effects, so I prepared an antipyretic. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The second dose of the Corona vaccine seems to have |
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Moderna seems to have a stronger side reaction than Pfizer, but I heard that Moderna is more effective. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Moderna seems to have You can use either, "have stronger side effects" or "cause stronger reactions". "Side reaction" doesn't really have a meaning. "A stronger side effect" makes the sentence definite, meaning there's a specific and singular side effect being mentioned that the reader knows about. Since the side effect is general, that's why my correction is plural. |
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