March 17, 2021
Cooking
It is not easy for me to cook even though It’s been for 7 years since I had married. There are many things to do. Firstly, It’s very important to make what my family especially my daughter eat well. She doesn’t like vegetables. So I need cook them delicious. Secondly I don’t want to use much time to cook. Because I only have 3.5. hours until going to bed. For the last, this is important the best is that I want to know how they are spending today through conversation during dinner.
結婚して７年経った今でも、私にとって料理をすることは容易くない。やることが沢山ある。まず、私の家族、特に娘が良く食べる物を作ることが大切だ。彼女は野菜が好きではないので、美味しく調理しなくてはいけない。次に、私は料理にあまり時間をかけたくない。寝るまでに３時間半しかないから。最後に、食事中の会話を通して、家族がどんな１日を過ごしていたのかを知りたい。
It is not easy for me to cook even though It’s been for 7 years since I hadgot married.
In speech at least, we always say "got married." Had married works only in a few contexts like retelling stories that happened in the past. "She was happy, because she had married 3 days earlier." Still, that's rather formal. Typical use would be "She was happy, because she had gotten married 3 days earlier."
Firstly, It’s very important to make wfood that my family, especially my daughter eat well, likes to eat.
She doesn’t like vegetables.
So I need cook them in a way that makes them delicious.
If you used "deliciously" (the adverb of "delicious," which is the form you need to use to describe a verb like "cook"), it makes it sounds like the way you're cooking/preparing the food tastes good rather than the food itself. It's a big rephrase here, but there's not a simple way I could think of to say what you wanted in English without making the sentence longer.
Secondly, I don’t want to usespend much time to cooking.
Use too much time to cook was grammatically correct but not the way we'd phrase it. We "spend time" on things.
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I feel similarly about cooking, and hate vegetables! Good luck with the cooking :)
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It is not easy for me to cook even though It’s been for 7 years since I had married. It is not easy for me to cook even though It’s been for 7 years since I In speech at least, we always say "got married." Had married works only in a few contexts like retelling stories that happened in the past. "She was happy, because she had married 3 days earlier." Still, that's rather formal. Typical use would be "She was happy, because she had gotten married 3 days earlier." |
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There are many things to do. |
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Firstly, It’s very important to make what my family especially my daughter eat well. Firstly, It’s very important to make |
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She doesn’t like vegetables. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So I need cook them delicious. So I need cook them in a way that makes them delicious. If you used "deliciously" (the adverb of "delicious," which is the form you need to use to describe a verb like "cook"), it makes it sounds like the way you're cooking/preparing the food tastes good rather than the food itself. It's a big rephrase here, but there's not a simple way I could think of to say what you wanted in English without making the sentence longer. |
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Secondly I don’t want to use much time to cook. Second Use too much time to cook was grammatically correct but not the way we'd phrase it. We "spend time" on things. |
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Because I only have 3.5. hours until going to bed. Because I only have 3.5. hours |
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For the last, this is important the best is that I want to know how they are spending today through conversation during dinner. F |
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