Conversations about men's perspective 4

sho

April 27, 2023

Conversations about men's perspective 4

Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not sound like a textbook. 🙇‍♂️
Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period. Also, sorry for the length.🙏

Which is your favorite way to hold hands?
Oh, this is interesting. Have I ever thought of this, absolutely not.
Now that I see it actually I can see my favorite way of holding hands.
I think I got mine.
I kind of get mine.
Okay. Three two one.
Always you, man. Why you gotta be so different.
What's wrong with you guys.
You're the odd out here, man.
I was going to pick three.
Oh, really.
I like it sometime.
That's not the primary method, you know.
I feel it's cute. I mean I like it. But when I'm like typically holding hands, it's typically the lock.
Yeah, you got to lock it.
I don't want no one to break the boundaries. Also I'm nervous of my pinky.
What.
I'm scared.
That it's going to rip off?
Yeah, I feel it's going to break. It's so fragile, you know. I don't know, I don't really like my pinky being held very much.
And, if it's not number two, it's usually number one.
Really. I can't do that.
Oh really? It's fine.
That's weird.
Oh no no no, this is like,
That's like a friend.
Well...
Haha
You hold hands like that with friend?
No.
I get what you say. You don't always lock.
Yeah, you don't always lock and my fingers get tired of it.
Yeah, yeah. So the reason I picked three is because I don't like holding hands in general that much. I like when it's like just like for a minite or two locking it for a second and then release it again. Also I get sweaty hands very easily.
Me too. Me too. Me too. Me too.

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mari

A Conversation~~s about men's perspective~~ between Two Guys 4

Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not sound like a textbook.

🙇‍♂️

Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period.

Also, sorry for the length.🙏

Which is your favorite way to hold hands?

また、

What's your favorite way to hold hands?

Oh, this is interesting.

Have I ever thought of this, absolutely not.

Now that I see it actually I ~~can see~~think I know my favorite way of holding hands.

このの方が自然です。

I think I got mine.

I've kind of geot mine.

Okay.

Three two one.

Always you, man.

Why you gotta be so different.

What's wrong with you guys.

You're the odd one out here, man.

I was going to pick three.

Oh, really.

I like it sometimes.

That's not the primary method, you know.

I feel like it's cute.

I mean I like it.

But when I'm like ~~typically~~ holding hands, it's ~~typic~~usually the lock.

Yeah, you got to lock it.

I don't want no anyone to break ~~the~~any boundaries.

?? ちょっと分かりにくいと思います。

Also I'm nervous ofabout my pinky.

What.

I'm scared.

That it's going to rip off?

Yeah, I feel it's going to break.

It's so fragile, you know.

I don't know, I don't really like my pinky being held very much.

And, if it's not number two, it's usually number one.

Really.

I can't do that.

Oh really?

It's fine.

That's weird.

Oh no no no, this is like,

That's like a friend.

Well...

Haha

You hold hands like that with a friend?(!)

No.

I get what you say.

You don't always lock.

Yeah, you don't always lock and my fingers get tired of it.

Yeah, yeah.

So the reason I picked three is because I don't like holding hands in general that much.

I like when it's ~~like~~ just like for a miniute or two locking it for a second and then releaseing it again.

また、

I like when it's just like for a minute or two locking it for a second and then letting go again.

I think this conversation is strange even if it's between guys.

Also I get sweaty hands very easily.

Me too.

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よく出来ました！

sho

April 29, 2023

ありがとうございます！！🙇‍♂️

bletillastriata

Conversations about men's perspective 4

Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not sound like a textbook.

🙇‍♂️

Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period.

Also, sorry for the length.🙏

Wh~~ich~~at is your favorite way to hold hands?

Oh, this is interesting.

Have I ever thought of this, absolutely not.

Now that I ~~see it~~think about it, I can actually ~~I can~~ see my favorite way of holding hands.

I think I got mine.

I kind of get mine.

Okay.

Three two one.

Always you, man.

Why you gotta be so different.

What's wrong with you guys.

You're the odd one out here, man.

I was going to pick three.

Oh, really.

I like it sometimes.

That's not the primary method, you know.

I feel it's cute.

I mean I like it.

But when I'm like typically holding hands, it's typically the lock.

It's not clear to me what "lock" means here

Yeah, you got to lock it.

I don't want no anyone to break the boundaries.

Also I'm nervous of my pinky.

What.

That it's going to rip off?

Yeah, I feel it's going to break.

It's so fragile, you know.

I don't know, I don't really like my pinky being held very much.

And, if it's not number two, it's usually number one.

Really.

I can't do that.

Oh really?

It's fine.

That's weird.

Oh no no no, this is like,

That's like a friend.

Well...

Haha

You hold hands like that with friends?

No.

I get what you're saying.

You don't always lock.

Yeah, you don't always lock and my fingers get tired of it.

Yeah, yeah.

So the reason I picked three is because I don't like holding hands that much in general ~~that much.~~

I like when it's like just like for a miniute or two locking it for a second and then release it again.

Also I get sweaty hands very easily.

Me too.

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Well done!

sho

April 28, 2023

Thank you so much!!🙏🙇‍♂️

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