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sho

April 27, 2023

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Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not sound like a textbook. 🙇‍♂️
Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period. Also, sorry for the length.🙏

Which is your favorite hairstyle?
This is easy for me.
Really. This is tough for me.
I think I know.
Wait. Wait. Okay. I think I got it.
Three two one.
We're always kind of. You're always splitting from the pack, man. What did you pick?
I picked three. Actually I like long hair. That's why I like braids, I like ponytails, I like a messy bun but I like myself a nice ponytail, I don't know why. Ponytail for me.
I picked messy bun actually for that reason too though. I also like long hair. So when she's in a messy bun, it's pulled back a little bit and then she takes it out, pooh! What are do you doing.(Whatchu doing? )What are you doing, you know. And Japanese men like the nape of a woman's neck and me too that's why I chose three, which shows it more.
Why did you pick?
I just like that natural look. Like the look where it looks like she's not putting in too much work. So I really like that. And I don't like those braids so that's why it kind of.
Really. I like them all, to be honest.

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Conversations about mefrom a Man's pPerspective 3

また、このの方が自然です、

A Conversation between Two Guys 3

Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not sound like a textbook.

🙇‍♂️

Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period.

Also, sorry for the length.🙏

Which is your favorite hairstyle?

This is easy for me.

Really.

This is tough for me.

I think I know.

Wait.

Wait.

Okay.

I think I got it.

Three two one.

We're always kind of.

You're always splitting from the pack, man.

What did you pick?

I picked three.

Actually I like long hair.

That's why I like braids, I like ponytails, I like a messy bun but I like myself a nice ponytail, I don't know why.

Ponytail for me.

I picked messy bun actually for that reason too though.

I also like long hair.

So when she's in a messy bun, it's pulled back a little bit and then she takes it out, pooh!

What are do you doing.

(Whatchu doing? )What are you doing, you know.

And Japanese men like the nape of a woman's neck and me too that's why I chose three, which shows it more.

Why did you pick what you did?

また、

Why did you choose that?
Why did you pick that?

I just like that natural look.

Like the look where it looks like she's not putting in too much work.

So I really like that.

And I don't like those braids so that's why it kind ofI didn't pick it.

Really.

I like them all, to be honest.

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面白いです。そして、上手に書けています!

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sho

April 29, 2023

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ありがとうございます!!🙇‍♂️

Conversations about men's perspective 3

Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not sound like a textbook.

🙇‍♂️

Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period.

Also, sorry for the length.🙏

Whichat is your favorite hairstyle?

This is easy for me.

Really.

This is tough for me.

I think I know.

Wait.

Wait.

Okay.

I think I got it.

Three two one.

We're always kind of.

You're always splitting from the pack, man.

What did you pick?

I picked three.

That's why I like braids, I like ponytails, I like a messy bun but I like myself a nice ponytail, I don't know why.

Ponytail for me.

IThough I actually picked messy bun actually for that reason too though.

I also like long hair.

So when she's in a messy bun, it's pulled back a little bit and then she takes it out, pooh!

What are do you doing.

(Whatchu doing? )What are you doing, you know.

And Japanese men like the nape of a woman's neck and me too that's why I chose three, which shows it more.

Why did you pick?

I just like that natural look.

Like the look where it looks like she's not putting in too much work.

So I really like that.

And I don't like those braids so that's why it's kind of.

Kind of what?

Really.

I like them all, to be honest.

Feedback

Good job!

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sho

April 28, 2023

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Thank you so much!🙏

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また、このの方が自然です、 A Conversation between Two Guys 3

Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?


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I'd like to speak English more naturally and not sound like a textbook.


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🙇‍♂️


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Which is your favorite hairstyle?


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Really.


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This is tough for me.


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I think I know.


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Okay.


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Three two one.


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We're always kind of.


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You're always splitting from the pack, man.


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What did you pick?


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I picked three.


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Actually I like long hair.


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That's why I like braids, I like ponytails, I like a messy bun but I like myself a nice ponytail, I don't know why.


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Ponytail for me.


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I picked messy bun actually for that reason too though.


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I also like long hair.


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So when she's in a messy bun, it's pulled back a little bit and then she takes it out, pooh!


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What are do you doing.


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What are do you doing.

(Whatchu doing? )What are you doing, you know.


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And Japanese men like the nape of a woman's neck and me too that's why I chose three, which shows it more.


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Why did you pick?


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Why did you pick what you did?

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I just like that natural look.


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Like the look where it looks like she's not putting in too much work.


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So I really like that.


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And I don't like those braids so that's why it kind of.


And I don't like those braids so that's why it's kind of.

Kind of what?

And I don't like those braids so that's why it kind ofI didn't pick it.

Really.


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I like them all, to be honest.


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