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sho

April 27, 2023

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Conversations about men's perspective

Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not sound like a textbook. 🙇‍♂️
Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period. Also, sorry for the length.🙏

Which place to go on an anniversary date?
That's a hard.
Now I'm ready.
Are you ready, too?
Yeah, I think I got it.
Okay. Three two one.
I chose theme park because I like fun stuff. That's all it is. I like fancy dinners and stuff too, but it's not really my style per se like I like to make things more sentimental.
I picked sunset dinner. Like fancy is that's not my world at all. A sunset dinner is more about the location. So you can also just have an onigiri actually. For example.
It's more about the time, the place. Maybe some music.
Yeah, that's true. You could kind of make it your own.
Yeah, exactly.
Righttt. Actually, I changed three. I got your idea. If I were a woman, I'd fall for you.
Right? haha

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Conversations about mefrom a Man's pPerspective

「... from a man's perspective」とか「... from woman's perspective」とか「... from a child's perspective」とかは普通のフレーズです。

Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not sound like a textbook.

🙇‍♂️

Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period.

Also, sorry for the length.🙏

Which place to go onere would you go (out) for an anniversary (date)?

また、

if you were going to celebrate an anniversary, where would you go?
If you were going to take someone out for an anniversary, where would you go?

That's a hard.

「hard」は形容詞なので、articleを使いません。

Now I'm ready.

Are you ready, too?

Yeah, I think I got it.

Okay.

Three two one.

I chose'd go to a theme park because I like to do fun stuff.

このの方が自然です。

That's all it iswhy.

また、

That's all I can think of.

I like fancy dinners and stuff too, but it's not really my style per se like I like to make things more sentimental.

I pickedwould have a sunset dinner.

また、

i would take her to a sunset dinner.

LikeThat sounds so fancy is t. That's not my world at all.

A sunset dinner is more about the location.

So you can also just have an onigiri actually.

For example.

It's more about the time, the place.

Maybe some music.

Yeah, that's true.

You could kind of make it your own.

Yeah, exactly.

Righttt.

Actually, I've changed my mind about three.

I got your ideaunderstand now.

If I were a woman, I'd fall for you.

Right?

haha

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かわいい。よく書けています!

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sho

April 29, 2023

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Which place to go onere would you go (out) for an anniversary (date)?

They are choosing between three options, but can I say that?

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mari

April 29, 2023

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Yes, you can say either of the above while looking at the options. You can also say either of the below sentences:

- If you're going to celebrate an anniversary, which place would you go?
- If you're going to celebrate an anniversary, which would you choose?
- Which one would you celebrate an anniversary at? (not grammatically correct but often spoken)

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sho

May 2, 2023

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Yes, you can say either of the above while looking at the options. You can also say either of the below sentences: - If you're going to celebrate an anniversary, which place would you go? - If you're going to celebrate an anniversary, which would you choose? - Which one would you celebrate an anniversary at? (not grammatically correct but often spoken)

なるほど!!すごいタメになります!ありがとうございます!!🙇‍♂️🙏

Conversations about men's perspectives

After I read your post, I think the title "Conversations from men's perspectives" or "Conversations from a man's perspective" would make more sense

Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not sound like a textbook.

🙇‍♂️

Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period.

Also, sorry for the length.🙏

Which placere to go on an anniversary date?

That's a hard.

Now I'm ready.

Are you ready, too?

Yeah, I think I got it.

Okay.

Three two one.

I chose a theme park because I like fun stuff.

That's all it is.

I like fancy dinners and stuff too, but it's not really my style per se like I like to make things more sentimental.

I picked a sunset dinner.

Like fancy is that's not my world at all.

A sunset dinner is more about the location.

So you can also just have an onigiri actually.

For example.

It's more about the time, the place.

Maybe some music.

Yeah, that's true.

You could kind of make it your own.

Yeah, exactly.

Righttt.

Actually, I changed three.

This is grammatically correct, but without context, I cannot tell what "three" is referring to. Changed three what?

I got your idea.

If I were a woman, I'd fall for you.

Right?

haha

Feedback

Good job!

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sho

April 28, 2023

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Actually, I changed three.

They were choosing between three options, and at first he chose a different number, but then changed it to 3 because he thought the others' opinion was better.
What do you say in this situation?

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bletillastriata

May 1, 2023

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They were choosing between three options, and at first he chose a different number, but then changed it to 3 because he thought the others' opinion was better. What do you say in this situation?

Ah thank you for the context. You could say, "Actually, I change/changed my answer to three."

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sho

May 2, 2023

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Ah thank you for the context. You could say, "Actually, I change/changed my answer to three."

Thank you so much!🙇‍♂️🙏

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Conversations about men's perspectives

After I read your post, I think the title "Conversations from men's perspectives" or "Conversations from a man's perspective" would make more sense

Conversations about mefrom a Man's pPerspective

「... from a man's perspective」とか「... from woman's perspective」とか「... from a child's perspective」とかは普通のフレーズです。

Is there a way to say these sentences more naturally?


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I'd like to speak English more naturally and not sound like a textbook.


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🙇‍♂️


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Since this is casual conversation, there is no need to correct mistakes in capitalization, casing, or forgetting to type a period.


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Also, sorry for the length.🙏


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Which place to go on an anniversary date?


Which placere to go on an anniversary date?

Which place to go onere would you go (out) for an anniversary (date)?

また、 if you were going to celebrate an anniversary, where would you go? If you were going to take someone out for an anniversary, where would you go?

That's a hard.


That's a hard.

That's a hard.

「hard」は形容詞なので、articleを使いません。

Now I'm ready.


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Are you ready, too?


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Yeah, I think I got it.


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Okay.


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Three two one.


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I chose theme park because I like fun stuff.


I chose a theme park because I like fun stuff.

I chose'd go to a theme park because I like to do fun stuff.

このの方が自然です。

That's all it is.


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That's all it iswhy.

また、 That's all I can think of.

I like fancy dinners and stuff too, but it's not really my style per se like I like to make things more sentimental.


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I picked sunset dinner.


I picked a sunset dinner.

I pickedwould have a sunset dinner.

また、 i would take her to a sunset dinner.

Like fancy is that's not my world at all.


Like fancy is that's not my world at all.

LikeThat sounds so fancy is t. That's not my world at all.

A sunset dinner is more about the location.


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So you can also just have an onigiri actually.


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For example.


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It's more about the time, the place.


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Maybe some music.


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Yeah, that's true.


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You could kind of make it your own.


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Yeah, exactly.


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Righttt.


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Actually, I changed three.


Actually, I changed three.

This is grammatically correct, but without context, I cannot tell what "three" is referring to. Changed three what?

Actually, I've changed my mind about three.

I got your idea.


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I got your ideaunderstand now.

If I were a woman, I'd fall for you.


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Right?


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haha


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