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May 1, 2022

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Conversation about three meals at April 28th, 29th 2022

Could you please help correct anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙇‍♂️
And I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreign people
I await your harsh comments!! 💪

By the way,
A is a me.
B is a foreigner.


A: For breakfast on the 28th, I had yesterday's leftover turnips with a sauce mixed with vinegar and miso, and I also had a meat and Veggie stir fry and a burrito I bought at a convenience store.
B: What seasoning did you use for the stir fry? 
A: Salt and pepper for the stir-fry.
B: That's perfect for the morning.
A: Yeah, simple is the best!
B: Good! What about lunch?
A: Korean instant ramen called "shin ramen" with steamed chicken!
B: Oh, I love "shin ramen"!
A: Yeah? It's delicious, right?
B: For sho!
What about dinner?
A: Ready-to-eat hamburger steak from the supermarket and sausage and cabbage!
B: Ready-to-eat meal is best when you're busy, right?
A: Yeah, I thank the persoo who invented it every day.
B: Yeah, definitely. What about the 29th?
A: I skipped breakfast on the 29th, had dried shoyu ramen for lunch, and had miso soup, teriyaki pork, tofu and aojiru for dinner.
B: How was it?
A: Well, the teriyaki tasted a little strong, but everything else was good, it's not that the teriyaki was bad, but I think I was thirstier than if I would have been in the desert. lol
What did you eat?

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Conversation about three meals aton April 28th, and 29th 2022

Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙇‍♂️

And I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreign people

I await your harsh comments!!

💪

By the way,

A is a me.

B is a foreigner.

A: For breakfast on the 28th, I had yesterday's leftover turnips with a sauce mixed withade of vinegar and miso, and I also had a meat and Veggie stir fry and a burrito I bought at a convenience store.

B: What seasoning did you use for the stir fry?

A: Salt and pepper for the stir-fry.

B: That's perfect for the morning.

A: Yeah, simple is the best!

B: Good!

What about lunch?

A: Korean instant ramen called "shin ramen" with steamed chicken!

B: Oh, I love "shin ramen"!

A: Yeah?

It's delicious, right?

B: For sho!

What about dinner?

A: Ready-to-eat hamburger steak from the supermarket and, sausage and cabbage!

B: Ready-to-eat meal iss are the best when you're busy, right?

A: Yeah, I thank the persoon who invented ithem every day.

B: Yeah, definitely.

What about on the 29th?

A: I skipped breakfast on the 29th, had dried shoyu ramen for lunch, and had miso soup, teriyaki pork, tofu and aojiru for dinner.

B: How was it?

A: Well, the teriyaki tasted a little strong, but everything else was good, it's not that the teriyaki was bad, but I think I wasit made me thirstier than if I would have been in the desert.usual.

This is more natural.

lol

What did you eat?

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Good job, very few mistakes and it sounded very natural...and delicious!

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sho

May 4, 2022

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Oh, thank you so much!!😆😋

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Conversation about three meals at April 28th, 29th 2022


Conversation about three meals aton April 28th, and 29th 2022

Could you please help correct anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?


Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙇‍♂️


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And I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreign people


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I await your harsh comments!!


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💪


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A: For breakfast on the 28th, I had yesterday's leftover turnips with a sauce mixed with vinegar and miso, and I also had a meat and Veggie stir fry and a burrito I bought at a convenience store.


A: For breakfast on the 28th, I had yesterday's leftover turnips with a sauce mixed withade of vinegar and miso, and I also had a meat and Veggie stir fry and a burrito I bought at a convenience store.

B: What seasoning did you use for the stir fry?


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A: Salt and pepper for the stir-fry.


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B: That's perfect for the morning.


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A: Yeah, simple is the best!


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B: Good!


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What about lunch?


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A: Korean instant ramen called "shin ramen" with steamed chicken!


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B: Oh, I love "shin ramen"!


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A: Yeah?


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It's delicious, right?


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B: For sho!


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What about dinner?


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A: Ready-to-eat hamburger steak from the supermarket and sausage and cabbage!


A: Ready-to-eat hamburger steak from the supermarket and, sausage and cabbage!

B: Ready-to-eat meal is best when you're busy, right?


B: Ready-to-eat meal iss are the best when you're busy, right?

A: Yeah, I thank the persoo who invented it every day.


A: Yeah, I thank the persoon who invented ithem every day.

B: Yeah, definitely.


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What about the 29th?


What about on the 29th?

A: I skipped breakfast on the 29th, had dried shoyu ramen for lunch, and had miso soup, teriyaki pork, tofu and aojiru for dinner.


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B: How was it?


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A: Well, the teriyaki tasted a little strong, but everything else was good, it's not that the teriyaki was bad, but I think I was thirstier than if I would have been in the desert.


A: Well, the teriyaki tasted a little strong, but everything else was good, it's not that the teriyaki was bad, but I think I wasit made me thirstier than if I would have been in the desert.usual.

This is more natural.

lol


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