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sho

May 1, 2022

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Conversation about three meals at April 26th, 27th 2022

Could you please help correct anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙇‍♂️
And I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreign people
I await your harsh comments!! 💪

By the way,
A is a me.
B is a foreigner.


A: On the 26th, I had an fried egg over rice for breakfast, skipped lunch, and had "suiton" for dinner.
B: What is "suiton"?
A: It is a stewed dish made by making dumplings out of wheat flour and adding them, vegetables, meat, and other ingredients to a soup made with miso and soy sauce.
B: Is it good?
A: It's delicious!
It's so easy to make, I'll make it for you some time!
B: That's a great idea!
I'll make something to take with me then!
A: It's like a party! Sounds like fun!


A: On the 27th, I had leftover "suiton" and sugar toast for breakfast, skipped lunch, and had mackerel for dinner at 6:00 pm, earlier than usual.
B: How did you make the sugar toast?
A: I just sprinkled sugar on the bread. lol
B: Oh, sounds simple and delicious.
How did you eat the mackerel?
A: I grilled it.
It was fatty and delicious.

Corrections

A: On the 26th, I had an fried egg overwith rice for breakfast, skipped lunch, and had "suiton" for dinner.

B: What is "suiton"?

this was my next question too, hahaha

A: It is a stewed dish made by, first you makinge dumplings out of wheat flour and adding them,. Then you add vegetables, meat, and other ingredients to a soup, that is made with miso (paste) and soy sauce.

B: Is it good?

A: It's delicious!

It's so easy to make, I'll make it for you some time!

B: That's a great idea!

I'll make something to take with me then!

A: It's like a party!

A: On the 27th, I had leftover "suiton" and sugar toast for breakfast, skipped lunch, and had mackerel for dinner at 6:00 pm, earlier than usual.

B: How did you make the sugar toast?

A: I just sprinkled sugar on the bread.

lol

B: Oh, sounds simple and delicious.

How did you eat the mackerel?

A: I grilled it.

It was fatty and delicious.

Feedback

Good good, in everyday language we dont actually say 'lol' anymore, its a bit 2010

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sho

May 4, 2022

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Thank you so much!!
The current trend is "haha"?

A: It's delicious!


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Conversation about three meals at April 26th, 27th 2022


Could you please help correct anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?


I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! 🙇‍♂️


And I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreign people


I await your harsh comments!!


💪


By the way,


A is a me.


B is a foreigner.


A: On the 26th, I had an fried egg over rice for breakfast, skipped lunch, and had "suiton" for dinner.


A: On the 26th, I had an fried egg overwith rice for breakfast, skipped lunch, and had "suiton" for dinner.

B: What is "suiton"?


B: What is "suiton"?

this was my next question too, hahaha

A: It is a stewed dish made by making dumplings out of wheat flour and adding them, vegetables, meat, and other ingredients to a soup made with miso and soy sauce.


A: It is a stewed dish made by, first you makinge dumplings out of wheat flour and adding them,. Then you add vegetables, meat, and other ingredients to a soup, that is made with miso (paste) and soy sauce.

B: Is it good?


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It's so easy to make, I'll make it for you some time!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

B: That's a great idea!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'll make something to take with me then!


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A: It's like a party!


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Sounds like fun!


A: On the 27th, I had leftover "suiton" and sugar toast for breakfast, skipped lunch, and had mackerel for dinner at 6:00 pm, earlier than usual.


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B: How did you make the sugar toast?


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A: I just sprinkled sugar on the bread.


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lol


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B: Oh, sounds simple and delicious.


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How did you eat the mackerel?


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A: I grilled it.


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It was fatty and delicious.


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