Jan. 25, 2023
Consumption of energy in the USA
The line graph illustrates the use of different sources of energy in the US over a span of 50 years from 1980 to 2030.
The figure for petrol and oil will increase significantly during the whole period. It is always the most important energy source between 1980 and 2030 and will be expected to reach a peak in 2030, at around 50q. The consumption of coal presents a similar pattern, rising from over 15q in 1980 to around 30q in 2030. There was a slight fluctuation in the account of natural gas from 1980 to 2013, before standing at 25q in 2015 for following over 15 consecutive years.
The account of remaining three resources are much lower. We will see a steady growth to nearly 9q in nuclear in 2030 and the amount of solar/wind will show a similar trend, climbing to around 5q by the end of 2030. The hydropower, however, will be predicted to fall to around 3q in 2030.
Overall, almost all energy consumption is expected to rise to various degrees, however, the use of hydropower will show a different pattern. The consumption of petrol and oil will be by far the highest in the US.
Consumption of energy in the USA
The line graph illustrates the use of different sources of energy in the US over a span of 50 years from 1980 to 2030.
The figure forusage of petrol and oil will increases significantly during the whole period.
It is alwaysPetrol and oil remain the most important energy sources between 1980 and 2030 and will be expected to reach a peak in 2030, at around 50q quadrillion units.
Because "petrol and oil" are two different things, "it" is a bit confusing (even though they are coupled in the graph). A reader might expect "they", but I think it sounds better to restate the subject.
The consumption of coal presents a similar pattern, rising from over 15q quadrillion units in 1980 to around 30q in 2030.
I've never seen "q" before. At the very least it is clearer to state the unit, even though it is quite a mouthful! (I haven't repeated this correction, though, you might be writing to an audience that would be expected to know what "q" means).
There was a slight fluctuation in the accountuse of natural gas from 1980 to 2013, before standing at 25q in 2015 for following over 15 consecutive years.
The accountuse of remaining three resources are much lower.
I understand what you mean by "account". But that usage is more for a 'bank account' and suggests that someone is liable to cover the usage of gas, etc.
We will see a steady growth to nearly 9q in nuclear inby 2030 and the amount of solar/wind will show a similar trend, climbing to around 5q by the end of 2030.
The hHydropower, however, will beis predicted to fall to around 3q in 2030.
Hydropower is a category, not a definitive object in this sentence. The tense for this report should be the present - the prediction has been made in the present. "Will be predicted" means that you are predicting that _in the future_ someone will predict hydropower usage will fall.
Overall, almost all energy consumption is expected to rise to various degrees, however, the use of hydropower will show a different pattern.
TStill, the consumption of petrol and oil will be by far the highest in the US.
The sentence is OK as it is, but without "still" at the start, it feels unrelated to the flow of the rest of the report.
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Some good writing there! Although I hope that the report's predictions are wrong and renewable usage increases faster!
Consumption of eEnergy in the USA
The line graph illustrates the use of different sources of energy in the US over a span of 50 years from 1980 to 2030.
The figure for petrol and oil will increases significantly during the whole period.
It is always the most important energy source between 1980 and 2030 and will be expected to reach a peak in 2030, at around 50q.
The consumption of coal presents a similar pattern, rising from over 15q in 1980 to around 30q in 2030.
There was a slight fluctuation in the accountconsumption of natural gas from 1980 to 2013, before standingleveling off at 25q in 2015 for following over 15 consecutivethe next 15 years.
The account ofconsumption of the remaining three resources are much lower.
We will see a steady growth to nearly 9q in nuclear in 2030 and the amountconsumption of solar/wind will show a similar trend, climbing to around 5q by the end of 2030.
The hHydropower, however, will beis predicted to fall toremain level at around 3q in 2030.
Overall, almost all of the energy consumption is expected to rise to various degrees, however, the use of natural gas and hydropower will show a different patterns.
The consumption of petrol and oil will be by far the highest in the US.
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Good work!
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The line graph illustrates the use of different sources of energy in the US over a span of 50 years from 1980 to 2030. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The figure for petrol and oil will increase significantly during the whole period. The figure for petrol and oil The |
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It is always the most important energy source between 1980 and 2030 and will be expected to reach a peak in 2030, at around 50q. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Because "petrol and oil" are two different things, "it" is a bit confusing (even though they are coupled in the graph). A reader might expect "they", but I think it sounds better to restate the subject. |
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The consumption of coal presents a similar pattern, rising from over 15q in 1980 to around 30q in 2030. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The consumption of coal presents a similar pattern, rising from over 15 I've never seen "q" before. At the very least it is clearer to state the unit, even though it is quite a mouthful! (I haven't repeated this correction, though, you might be writing to an audience that would be expected to know what "q" means). |
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There was a slight fluctuation in the account of natural gas from 1980 to 2013, before standing at 25q in 2015 for following over 15 consecutive years. There was a slight fluctuation in the There was a slight fluctuation in the |
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The account of remaining three resources are much lower. The The I understand what you mean by "account". But that usage is more for a 'bank account' and suggests that someone is liable to cover the usage of gas, etc. |
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We will see a steady growth to nearly 9q in nuclear in 2030 and the amount of solar/wind will show a similar trend, climbing to around 5q by the end of 2030. We will see We will see a steady growth to nearly 9q in nuclear |
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The hydropower, however, will be predicted to fall to around 3q in 2030.
Hydropower is a category, not a definitive object in this sentence. The tense for this report should be the present - the prediction has been made in the present. "Will be predicted" means that you are predicting that _in the future_ someone will predict hydropower usage will fall. |
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Overall, almost all energy consumption is expected to rise to various degrees, however, the use of hydropower will show a different pattern. Overall, almost all of the energy consumption is expected to rise to various degrees, however, the use of natural gas and hydropower will show This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The consumption of petrol and oil will be by far the highest in the US. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
The sentence is OK as it is, but without "still" at the start, it feels unrelated to the flow of the rest of the report. |
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