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Tammy

March 15, 2024

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Consumer Rights Day

It's a big day for our marketers in China today.

Because it's March 15, the Consumer Rights Day.

Every year on this particular day, there are many PR events and marketing activities in almost every consumer company and business community. Bosses will review consumer services all over the past year and announce some improvement approaches based on data analysis and consumer interviews.

Although it's a little tiring for us to prepare these proposals, improving consumer service and protection is essential for a healthy company, industry, and even society.


消费者权利保护日

今天是中国营销人员的大日子。

因为今天是3月15日,消费者权益日。

每年的这一天,几乎每家消费品公司和商业社区都会举办公关活动和营销活动。老板们将回顾过去一年的消费者服务,并根据数据分析和消费者访谈宣布一些改进方案。

虽然准备这些方案对我们来说有点累,但对于一个健康的公司、行业乃至社会,改进对消费者的服务和保护都是必不可少的。

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Consumer Rights Day

It's a big day for our marketers in China today.

Because it's March 15, the Consumer Rights Day.

Every year on this particular day, there are many PR events and marketing activities in almost every consumer company and business community.

Bosses will review consumer services all over the past year and announce some imapprovement approacaches to improve thesm based on data analysis and consumer interviews.

Although it's a little tiring for us to prepare these proposals, improving consumer service and protection is essential for a healthy company, industry, and even society.

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Tammy

March 19, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections!

Consumer Rights Day

It's a big day for our marketers in China today, because it's Consumer Rights Day.

Because it's March 15, the Consumer Rights Day.

This is a sentence fragment, should be combined with the sentence above.

Every year on this particular day, there are many PR events and marketing activities in almost every consumer company and business community.

Bosses willManagers review consumer services all over the past year and announce some improvement approacheplans based on data analysis and consumer interviews.

I typically hear people use "boss" to indicate a particular person, and use "managers" if talking about them as a group.

Although it's a little tiring for us to prepare these proposals, improving consuustomer service and protection is essential for a healthy company, industry, and even society.

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Well written, mostly commenting on style to make it sound more natural. Good job!

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Tammy

March 15, 2024

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Thank you so much!

Consumer Rights Protection Day

It's a big day for our marketers in China today.

Alternative:
Today is a big day for Chinese marketers.

Every year on this particular day, there are many PR events and marketing activities in almost every consumer company and business community.

Bosses will review consumer services all over the past year and announce some improvement approaches based on data analysis and consumer interviews.

Although it's a little tiring for us to prepare these proposals, improving consumer service and protection is essential for a healthy company, industry, and even society.

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You write very well.

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Tammy

March 15, 2024

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Thank you so much!

Every year on this particular day, there are many PR events and marketing activities in almost every consumer company and business community.


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Bosses will review consumer services all over the past year and announce some improvement approaches based on data analysis and consumer interviews.


Bosses will review consumer services all over the past year and announce some improvement approaches based on data analysis and consumer interviews.

Bosses willManagers review consumer services all over the past year and announce some improvement approacheplans based on data analysis and consumer interviews.

I typically hear people use "boss" to indicate a particular person, and use "managers" if talking about them as a group.

Bosses will review consumer services all over the past year and announce some imapprovement approacaches to improve thesm based on data analysis and consumer interviews.

Although it's a little tiring for us to prepare these proposals, improving consumer service and protection is essential for a healthy company, industry, and even society.


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Although it's a little tiring for us to prepare these proposals, improving consuustomer service and protection is essential for a healthy company, industry, and even society.

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Consumer Rights Day


Consumer Rights Protection Day

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It's a big day for our marketers in China today.


It's a big day for our marketers in China today.

Alternative: Today is a big day for Chinese marketers.

It's a big day for our marketers in China today, because it's Consumer Rights Day.

It's a big day for our marketers in China today.

Because it's March 15, the Consumer Rights Day.


Because it's March 15, the Consumer Rights Day.

This is a sentence fragment, should be combined with the sentence above.

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