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Conflict Between Parkistan and India

A recent military conflict occurred between Pakistan and India. It was reported that two of the Indian advanced flight jets were shot down. I talked about it with an Indian friend, who said their government hadn't confirmed the event, but he emphasized that India shot down a Pakistani F-16 today. It's interesting that a lot of short video circulated on the internet, broadcasting that the contribution was from Chinese-made fighter jets. The tension in these regions has escalated.

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It was reported that two of the Indian advanced flight jets were shot down.

I talked about it with an Indian friend, who. He said their government hadn't confirmed the event, but he emphasized that India had already shot down a Pakistani F-16 today.

This works but separating the sentence may make it flow better.

It's interesting that a lot of short videos are circulateding on the internet, broadcasting that the contribution was from Chinese-made fighter jets.

Since this is still happening, it will be in the present tense.

The tension in these regions hasare continuing to escalated.

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Scarlett_Father

May 12, 2025

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Thank you!

OPTION A: The Conflict Between Parkistan and India
OPTION A: The Indian-Pakistani Conflict

SPELLING: X. Parkistan --> O Pakistan

A recent military conflict occurred between Pakistan and India.

It was reported that two of the Indian advanced Indian flighter jets were shot down.

I talked about it with an Indian friend, who said their government hadn't confirmed the event, but he emphasized that India shot down a Pakistani F-16 today.

It's interesting that a lot of short video circulated on the iInternet, broadcasting that the contribution was from Chinese-made fighter jets.

The tension in theseat regions has escalated.

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On May 11 it seems that the tension has decreased. Let us pray for peace.

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Scarlett_Father

May 11, 2025

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Thank you and your prayer.

I talked about it with an Indian friend, who said that their government hadn't confirmed the event, but he emphasized that India had shot down a Pakistani F-16 today.

It's interesting that a lot of short videos have been circulateding on the internet, broadcasting that the contribution was from Chinese-made fighter jets.

The tension ibetween these two regions has escalated.

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Well done!

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Scarlett_Father

May 11, 2025

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Conflict Between Parkistan and India


OPTION A: The Conflict Between Parkistan and India
OPTION A: The Indian-Pakistani Conflict

SPELLING: X. Parkistan --> O Pakistan

A recent military conflict occurred between Pakistan and India.


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It was reported that two of the Indian advanced flight jets were shot down.


It was reported that two of the Indian advanced Indian flighter jets were shot down.

It was reported that two of the Indian advanced flight jets were shot down.

I talked about it with an Indian friend, who said their government hadn't confirmed the event, but he emphasized that India shot down a Pakistani F-16 today.


I talked about it with an Indian friend, who said that their government hadn't confirmed the event, but he emphasized that India had shot down a Pakistani F-16 today.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I talked about it with an Indian friend, who. He said their government hadn't confirmed the event, but he emphasized that India had already shot down a Pakistani F-16 today.

This works but separating the sentence may make it flow better.

It's interesting that a lot of short video circulated on the internet, broadcasting that the contribution was from Chinese-made fighter jets.


It's interesting that a lot of short videos have been circulateding on the internet, broadcasting that the contribution was from Chinese-made fighter jets.

It's interesting that a lot of short video circulated on the iInternet, broadcasting that the contribution was from Chinese-made fighter jets.

It's interesting that a lot of short videos are circulateding on the internet, broadcasting that the contribution was from Chinese-made fighter jets.

Since this is still happening, it will be in the present tense.

The tension in these regions has escalated.


The tension ibetween these two regions has escalated.

The tension in theseat regions has escalated.

The tension in these regions hasare continuing to escalated.

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