March 14, 2021
Confessions
I watched a movie, "Kokuhaku (Confessions)". The story is a revenge drama about a teacher whose daughter was killed by two of her students. The movie is configured with confessions that the related characters tell their story. One of the themes is the pros and cons of juvenile law. Several juvenile crimes in the movie may be based on actual cases.
Confessions
I watched a movie called, "Kokuhaku (Confessions)"."
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I watched the movie, "Kokuhaku (Confessions)."
The story is a revenge drama about a teacher whose daughter was killed by two of her students.
The movie is configured withtold through the confessions thatof the related characters tell their story.
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The movie is told through the characters' confessions.
The movie is told through confessions.
The movie is told through confessions by the characters.
One of the themes is the pros and cons of juvenile law.
Several juvenile crimes in the movie may be based on actual cases.
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すごいです！私もその映画を見ました。悲しかったですが、面白かったです。アメリカでは同じ問題があります。
March 15, 2021
ありがとうございます！映画の構成と演出が独特で面白いと思いました。アメリカも同じ問題があるのは初耳でした。
Confessions
I watched a movie, "Kokuhaku (Confessions)".
The story is a revenge drama about a teacher whose daughter was killed by two of her students.
The movie is configured withmprised of confessions that twhe related the characters tell their story.
I understand your sentence but it sounds odd. If you want to use formal language 'comprised' works here, but in causal conversation I would say 'The movie is made up of confessions where the characters tell their story' :)
One of the themes is the pros and cons of juvenile law.
Several juvenile crimes in the movie may be based on actual cases.
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Fantastic, I still understood what you wanted to say on the one sentence I corrected. Keep it up :)
March 15, 2021
Thank you for your correction!
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The movie is configured with confessions that the related characters tell their story. The movie is co I understand your sentence but it sounds odd. If you want to use formal language 'comprised' works here, but in causal conversation I would say 'The movie is made up of confessions where the characters tell their story' :) The movie is US alternatives The movie is told through the characters' confessions. The movie is told through confessions. The movie is told through confessions by the characters. |
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