There was a time when I was really into ramen, so I would often go into ramen shops by myself on the way back home from work.

Meanwhile, I founOne time, I noticed some tourists from overseas staring at me eating at that timewhile I was eating.😓 The way Japanese people eat noodles arewas probably weird to them because we suck up noodles, making slurping noises.😅

You are talking about an event in the past, so I think "was probably weird to them" is best.

You could also say "they probably thought how I was eating was weird because Japanese people suck up noodles, making slurping noises."

I know making slurping or smacking noises while eating is rudeconsidered rude in many (some) countries.

Even so, I think this is the best part of enjoying ramens is there.

So, I had shied away from going into ramen shops infor the past two years.

Ahhh,🤦 I'm sorry I couldn't refrain myself from going into an eatery restaurant.

I won't do this anymoregain.

There was a time when I was really into ramen so I would often go into ramen shops by myself on the way back home from work.

MeanwhilOne time, I found some tourists from overseas staring at me eating at that time.😓 The way Japanese people eat noodles areis probably weird to them because we suck up noodlesthem up, making lots of noises.😅

I know making noises while eating is rude.

Even so, the best part of enjoying ramens is therebeing able to savor it.

To be honest, I don't like being watched by people, hate especially by strangers, when I eat something.

So, I had shied away from going into ramen shops infor the past two years.

Currently, while a mood of voluntary restrasocial distancintg is spreading nationwide, I found a ramen shop on my way home yesterday.

I'm not sure exactly what 自粛モード is but I'm guessing it's something like social distancing

Peeping through the door into the shop, I found no guestcustomers there!

I would use the term 'guests' for hotels, not restaurants

I rushed into the shop single-mindedly.without thinking about anything else

I would use the term 'single-mindedly' for the pursuit of long-term goals

I put a lot of grated garlic and a little bit of vinegar in my ramen to enjoy to the full.it to my heart's content

"To my heart's content" is a phrase used to describe enjoying something completely or wholeheartedly

Even if I'm deadly stinky smell like death, the next day is Saturday(that's today) so it’ll be no problem as Isince I'll be staying home all day.😁

"smell like death" just sounds more smooth than "deadly stinky"

I won't do ithis anymore.

In the meantime, I've watchedseen on TV that many small shops have been going bankrupt.

I hope this ramen shop will hold out until theour normal life isves are back.

There was a time when I was reallyso into ramen so, that I would often go in ramen shops by myself on the way back home from work.

Meanwhile, I foundDuring the time, some tourists from overseas would staringe at me eating at that time.😓 The way Japanese people eat noodles areis probably weird to them because we suck up noodles, making slurping noises.😅

Even so, the best part of enjoying ramens is thereBut that's part of what makes ramen so good.

To be honest, I don't like being watched by people, hate especially by strangers, when I eat somethingwhen I eat something. I especially hate it, when it's strangers.

Hard to use "hate" in the same sentence. You could just use "To be honest, I don't like being watched by people, especially by strangers, when I eat something." But I saw you put emphasis in the native text so I changed it this way.

So, I had shied away from going in ramen shops infor the past two years.

Currently, while a moodBut now, when an atmosphere of voluntary restraint is spreading nationwide, I found a ramen shop on my way home yesterday.

Peeping through the door into the shop, I found no guestcustomers there!

It' was now or never!

I rushed into the shop single-mindedlywithout thinking of anything else.

I put a lot of grated garlic and a little bit of vinegar in my ramen to enjoy it to the full.

Even if I'm became deadthly stinky, the next day iwas Saturday (that's today) so it’lld be no problem as I'd stay home all day.😁

I'm keeping all the tenses in past. It's common in Japanese to switch between present and past tense during narration, but in English it's very rare.

I hope this ramen shop will hold out until the normal life is back to normal.