Feb. 14, 2024
I attended a conference at school yesterday. It was about a Mexican philosopher called Antonio Caso. He studied at the Escuela Nacional Preparatoria number 1. He wanted to become a philosopher even though he studied law.
He became a excellent teacher who gave his life for education.
I learnt about his perspective, for example, he believed that the end doesn't justify the means, and that school must be a mirror of how we want our society to be.
Furthermore, he was part of a conference group called, "El ateneo de la juventud".
It was quite interesting.
Conference
I attended a conference at school yesterday.
It was about a Mexican philosopher called Antonio Caso.
He studied at the Escuela Nacional Preparatoria nNumber 1.
Since it's a name, I made it capital.
He wanted to become a philosopher even though he studied law.
He became an excellent teacher who gave his life for education.
I learnt a bit about his perspective,; for example, he believed that the end doesn't justify the means, and that school must be a mirror of how we want our society to be.
Furthermore, he was part of a conference group called, "El ateneo de la juventud".
It was quite interesting.
Feedback
Very nice
Conference
I attended a conference at school yesterday.
It was about a Mexican philosopher callnamed Antonio Caso.
“Named” is more accurate usage here. Your text is factual and thus informative in nature, it states, it handles facts and opinions with an objective tone. I would stay formal with “named”.
Correct/common examples of “called”: “She had a boy called Steve.” “He was a boy called Steve.” “She called the dog by its name.” More for casual writing conventions.
He studied at the Escuela Nacional Preparatoria number 1.
He wanted to become a philosopher even though he studied law.
He became an excellent teacher who gave his life for education.
A becomes a before nouns beginning with: a, e, i, o or u.
I learnt about his perspectives, for example, he believed that the end doesn't justify the means, and that school must be a mirror of how we want our society to be.
If you are writing “for example”, you automatically imply that there is more than one potential option. Therefore, perspective should be a plural to represent this fact.
Furthermore, he was part of a conference group called, "El ateneo de la juventud".
It was quite interesting.
Feedback
Lovely work 😊 I enjoyed learning about where this popular idiom came from!
Conference
I attended a conference at school yesterday.
It was about a Mexican philosopher called Antonio Caso.
He studied at the Escuela Nacional Preparatoria number 1 and wanted to become a philosopher even though he studied law.
Although these sentences are grammatically correct, repeating the same sentence structure can be boring. Try combining sentences.
He wanted to become a philosopher even though he studied law.
He became an excellent teacher who gave his life for education.
I learnted about his perspective, for example, he believed that the end doesn't justify the means, and that school must be a mirror of how we want our society to be.
"learned' is American English, while "learnt" is British. Make sure you're consistent with which English you're using.
Furthermore, he was part of a conference group called, "El aAteneo de la jJuventud"."
Punctuation & capitalization
Feedback
Great work. Try to focus on grammar patterns & sentence structures.
Conference
I attended a conference at school yesterday.
It was about a Mexican philosopher called Antonio Caso.
He studied at the Escuela Nacional Preparatoria number 1.
He wanted to become a philosopher even though he studied law.
He became an excellent teacher who gave his life for education.
I learnted about his perspective, f. For example, he believed that the end doesn't justify the means, and that school must be a mirror of how we want our society to be.
Furthermore, he was part of a conference group called, " El aAteneo de la jJuventud".
It was quite interesting.
Conference
I attended a conference at school yesterday.
It was about a Mexican philosopher called Antonio Caso.
He studied at the Escuela Nacional Preparatoria number 1.
numero uno maybe? haha
He wanted to become a philosopher even though he studied law.
He became an excellent teacher who gave his life forto education.
Or even better, "dedicated his life to education."
I learnted about his perspective, f. For example, he believed that the end doesn't justify the means, and that school must be ashould mirror of how we want our society to be.
"Learned" is used more commonly, at least in America.
Second part if fine, but it sounds better this way.
Furthermore, he was part of a conference group called, "El ateneo de la juventud".
It was quite interesting.
Feedback
Cool, I've never heard of him before.
Conference This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I attended a conference at school yesterday. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
It was about a Mexican philosopher called Antonio Caso. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! It was about a Mexican philosopher “Named” is more accurate usage here. Your text is factual and thus informative in nature, it states, it handles facts and opinions with an objective tone. I would stay formal with “named”. Correct/common examples of “called”: “She had a boy called Steve.” “He was a boy called Steve.” “She called the dog by its name.” More for casual writing conventions. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
He studied at the Escuela Nacional Preparatoria number 1. He studied at the Escuela Nacional Preparatoria number 1. numero uno maybe? haha This sentence has been marked as perfect! He studied at the Escuela Nacional Preparatoria number 1 and wanted to become a philosopher even though he studied law. Although these sentences are grammatically correct, repeating the same sentence structure can be boring. Try combining sentences. This sentence has been marked as perfect! He studied at the Escuela Nacional Preparatoria Since it's a name, I made it capital. |
He wanted to become a philosopher even though he studied law. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! He wanted to become a philosopher even though he studied law. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
He became a excellent teacher who gave his life for education. He became an excellent teacher who gave his life Or even better, "dedicated his life to education." He became an excellent teacher who gave his life for education. He became an excellent teacher who gave his life for education. He became an excellent teacher who gave his life for education. A becomes a before nouns beginning with: a, e, i, o or u. He became an excellent teacher who gave his life for education. |
I learnt about his perspective, for example, he believed that the end doesn't justify the means, and that school must be a mirror of how we want our society to be. I learn "Learned" is used more commonly, at least in America. Second part if fine, but it sounds better this way. I learn I learn "learned' is American English, while "learnt" is British. Make sure you're consistent with which English you're using. I learnt about his perspectives, for example, he believed that the end doesn't justify the means, and that school must be a mirror of how we want our society to be. If you are writing “for example”, you automatically imply that there is more than one potential option. Therefore, perspective should be a plural to represent this fact. I learnt a bit about his perspective |
Furthermore, he was part of a conference group called, "El ateneo de la juventud". This sentence has been marked as perfect! Furthermore, he was part of a conference group called Furthermore, he was part of a conference group called Punctuation & capitalization This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
It was quite interesting. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium