Jan. 6, 2023
Conditions
I am Serhan, from Guncel Concultancy in Turkey. We are a local accounting firm which has multiple clients across Turkey.
I could not find an appropirate contacts in the website to ask a couple of questions. That's why I am getting in touch with you. If you are not responsible for the following matter, maybe you can help me find someone who can answer my below questions.
We would like to use your brand name and I want to learn what conditions are if we want to use your brand along with our local name. Best Regards
Conditions
I am Serhan, from Guncel Concsultancy in Turkey.
We are a local accounting firm which has multiple clients across Turkey.
I could not find an appropirate contacts in the on your website to ask a couple of questions.
That's why I am getting in touch with you.
If you are not responsible forin charge of the following matter, maybeI would appreciate it if you canould help me find someone who can answer my below questions below.
We would like to use your brand name and I want to learnould like to understand what conditions arthere might be if we wantere to use your brand along with our local name.
Best Regards
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Merhaba Serhan umarım her şey iyidir. What you have written is not incorrect, but for this type of communication you could be more formal and sound more professional, so I am re-writing this for you how a native would say this:
Dear [isim],
On behalf of Guncel Consultancy, a Turkish accounting firm with multiple clients nationwide, I would like to enquire about whether it is possible to use your brand name together with our local name [****to build a partnership//for mutual commercial benefits//sebebi yaz burada****] across Turkey, and the corresponding conditions that would apply.
I did not find a specific contact for this purpose on your website, so if you are not the person responsible for this, I would appreciate it if you could kindly forward this to the appropriate person in your company.
Thank you.
Kind regards,
Serhan [soyadını da yaz]
Conditions
I am Serhan, from Guncel Concultancy in Turkey.
We are a local accounting firm which has multiple clients across Turkey.
I wanted to ask a couple of questions but could not find an appropiriate contacts i on the website to ask a couple of questions.
That's why I am getting in touch with you.
If you are not responsible for the following matter, maybe you can help me find someone who can answer my below questions.
We would like to use your brand name and I want to learn what conditions are if we wantthere are should we be allowed to use your brand alongname with our local name.
Best Rregards,
Feedback
Well done.
I could not find an appropiriate contacts i on the website to ask a couple of questions to.
If you are not responsible for the following matter, maybeperhaps you canould help me find someone who canould answer my below questions.?
Yours isn't wrong, but this is perhaps a more polite way to say it.
We would like to use your brand name and I want[in...e.g. our marketing materials] and I would like to learn about what conditions aremight apply if we wantere to use your brand along with our local name.
You might want to specify how exactly you want to use their brand name e.g. in marketing materials.
Best Regards,
Feedback
Well-written! Most of my edits have been to use the conditional tense e.g. 'can' to 'could', 'want' to 'would like'. It's a little more polite to put things this way, especially if your making a request from someone.
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